Sorry for the long post. Catching up from earlier today.
Sialater wrote...
That's IF Anderson has the authority to "borrow" Kaidan from the Alliance. We don't know that he does. The Human Councilor is hardly all powerful.
Not officially, but he has a lot of pull I"m sure with people such as Admiral Hackett.
Sage:
truly, i think horizon bothers me less than the fact kaidan isn't there at the end game run. i wanted him there. i felt like i forgave him after the email, but was bitter he wasn't there in the end. not sure what kyrie's gonna do about that. she hasn't told me yet.
The end of Act 2 is never supposed to be happy. There is a little lift at the end of the act, but mostly Act 2 of a 3 act play is a big downer. Putting the ME1 LI at the end would be too good. Too happy to have the reunion. And I'm sure they want to save it for Act 3.
Now, going to the Citadel in post-game play, finding the doctor, and scaring the heck out of her with your gun of choice?

That might fit.

Pheonix
Both of you may be right. The Power may only go toward Alliance members only. Like being a Human Councilor puts Anderson higher on the authority line than the Admirals of the Alliance aka Hackett...but not higher than the Council itself. Not only that but Hackett seemed like a reasonable man, if Anderson asked him something in certain parameters, I'm sure he'd allow one biotic Commander go under a Councilor's jurisdiction.
Also note that VS (in my case Kaidan
) is the only human/Alliance member that survived and has served directly under Shepard. So when Shepard died, they used her/him as a political icon and then used the VS as their new Alliance icon, second to Shepard since the VS was the only one alive at that point.
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Sage
that email was WAY too personal for something that could fall into cerberus hands IMO. just saying. that's why i want to believe it was encrypted. but i highly doubt that's what really happened.
I like that you thought to make it encrypted--highly so--in your fic.
I always REALLY hated the thought of Miranda and Kelly having pawed through such a personal message. Kaidan is laid so bare in it. They have no right to see him in such an intimate light. Your thought that they couldn't see it made me feel better. Again, your writing sometimes becomes my personal canon.

Collider
2. Before you land on Ilos, the Virmire Survivor gets panicky. I thought this was out of character for Kaidan. I've never had Kaidan die, but I heard that the dialog is exactly the same for both characters. I think Ashley would be far more likely to freak out.
3. At the start of Mass Effect 2, Kaidan & Liara wear Ashley's trademark phoenix armor.
2--I don't agree. He just professed that the idea of losing Shepard on this mission terrified him. Kaidan is Mr. Conservative. You haven't even started the mission yet and things are messed up, not optimal. I could see him losing it a little. Its one more step toward her getting killed potentially.
3--OH! Is that why? Huh.
Sage
however... i hate to say it, but i feel like kaidan has a much better chance of making it back as a LI and a starring role as he's the flip side of ashley's record, as it were. i know i may get some grief for saying so, but hey, you gotta admit, if they cut kaidan, they cut ash. i'd love to have some differences of char in there, but on the other hand, it does up the likelihood of kaidan being back in a big way.
True
Kabraxal
EDIT: hopefully they don't then sacrifice themselves to save the galaxay and leave a Shepard a long, heartfelt note telling her/him that they always loved them and Horizon was not how they ever felt. I could see the epilogue of depression, alcoholism, and rage guilt for that.
I'd be really upset.
I'd be very tempted to go out and sell all three games. There
has to be at least the possibility of having a happy ending with the ME1 LI. Perhaps it won't happen for all Sheps. But it
has to be a possibility. I'll hate the series forever if it isn't.

L.A
I think we need to stand outside Bioware headquarters in Kaidan wigs and demand our sexy biotic hunk.
Is there any way to contact BioWare/let them know that we are here and are quite devoted to the character? Do they notice how very active this thread is and get the hint?
Sage:
i am not certain about anderson knowing, but only because i don't know how long you were on the ship prior to eden prime. at times, it sounds like the crew was together a week or so, other times, it sounds like shep got on that ship that day. (chakwas's comment that kaidan "keeps to himself" but she never worked with him before = a while on the ship, however shep looking at earth, then you going by jupiter a second later = that day? just not sure)
if it was recently, i don't know if anderson would have known because he got cut out of the loop so early and wasn't around kaidan and shep. otherwise, if he'd been around, he might have figured it out.
I'm saying that rumors travel. It would be easy for Anderson to dismiss it officially as just rumor since Kaidan and Shepard were being careful to be professional. He may have chosen to be ignorant of anything going on there. But I don't doubt that the crew had rumors and that Anderson heard those rumors at some point.
As far as timing goes. It seems to me that the crew had been on the ship for a short time (a week or so?) getting it ready for the mission. Shepard stepped onto it from her journey from earth pretty much right before it left.