Joisan wrote...
Okay, plot hole eliminated. I think I like this even better, actually... leaves open some interesting possibilities for future stories. Now to get back to working on my current fanfic project...
Yay! Looking forward to future FF from you then

Estelindis wrote...
crimsonrhodelia wrote...
He doesn't strike me as someone with a lot of relationship experience, so it takes him some time to work up the courage to do/say something mushy (too busy second guessing himself at first), but when he does, it's honest and straight from the heart, not because it's something he knows he's supposed to do.

Well said. <3 Looking forward to some of that in ME3!
Well...true... I'll be alittle honest with you, and add that in that way I'm alot like him. I don't have massive amounts of experience with relationships, and am terrible at working out when women are trying to flirt with me.
And yes, your summary is pretty good.