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[FsDxRAGE]

FsDxRAGE wrote...

videowiz186 wrote...

Update on Salvation or Destruction. Still writing, but going at good pace. Estimation of completion is later tonight or tomorrow. Appreciate patience from all. Have idea. Might create poll asking what you would like to see in Part 8. Good idea?

good luck, still on that writters block?

here is to self promotion..... Chapter 4 of Snake in the Mud is up!
http://social.biowar...m/1258913/blog/

[SirEmilCrane]

videowiz186 wrote...

Update on Salvation or Destruction. Still writing, but going at good pace. Estimation of completion is later tonight or tomorrow. Appreciate patience from all. Have idea. Might create poll asking what you would like to see in Part 8. Good idea?

read your story, nice job

by the way, would apreciate some comments of my story, link in sig

[AddoExAtrum]

Well I am hopping off for a while guys.



If you haven't had a chance and want to read a unique style of writing try my Fanfic out

Chapter 12 is in my bioware blog

full works are on the fanfiction link!

[FsDxRAGE]

AddoExAtrum wrote...

Well I am hopping off for a while guys.

If you haven't had a chance and want to read a unique style of writing try my Fanfic out
Chapter 12 is in my bioware blog
full works are on the fanfiction link!

isn't yours in 2nd person?

[SirEmilCrane]

I guess we're on an ad break now

[AddoExAtrum]

FsDxRAGE wrote...

AddoExAtrum wrote...

Well I am hopping off for a while guys.

If you haven't had a chance and want to read a unique style of writing try my Fanfic out
Chapter 12 is in my bioware blog
full works are on the fanfiction link!

isn't yours in 2nd person?

2nd point of view yes. You actually are the character which is why it is unique. Most people write in third person where you are an outside view. Shepard walks into the bar and sees Jacob talking with Tali, the two of them seem to be having fun.

I write in 2nd PoV. You walk into the room and reach out, softly running your fingers over the edge of Tali's mask as you whisper softly "I have missed you"

[FsDxRAGE]

sorry, let's talk Tali, sall we?

dem chicken feet

[wolfstanus]

vykvyper1 wrote...

Yionel wrote...

damage incorp96 wrote...

Don't know about hacking the elevator, but would alway calibrate, yea calibrate the camera angles during the elevator rides with Tali.   

Thatd be funny in ME 3 scene you and Tali get stuck in a elevator...

I get the feeling that, after ME1, they (Garrus, Tali, and/or Shepard) would go insane if they got stuck in an elevator:blink:

Garus: So Tali want to talk about...
Tali: I swear to keela ill shoot you Gaurs if you finish the sentence.
Garus: Fine just trying to get a conversation going.
Shepard: Raises eyebrow
Tali: glares.

Modifié par wolfstanus, 21 février 2010 - 03:46 .

[Angelraid]

vykvyper1 wrote...

Yionel wrote...

damage incorp96 wrote...

Don't know about hacking the elevator, but would alway calibrate, yea calibrate the camera angles during the elevator rides with Tali.   

Thatd be funny in ME 3 scene you and Tali get stuck in a elevator...

I get the feeling that, after ME1, they (Garrus, Tali, and/or Shepard) would go insane if they got stuck in an elevator:blink:

LOL i like the idea, if they made it to where if you romanced garrus or tali in ME2 and they survived it could be like a special tribute scene.

Tali: Great, the elevators stuck
Shepard: Mmm, brings back memories.
Tali: I try not to think about it.
Shepard: Oh come on, it's not all bad. *slyly looks at Tali
Tali: What do you mean?
Shepard: Well... we are stuck here...
Tali: And?
Shepard: Alone....
Tali: Exactl...Oh! I... It's just that... I mean...
Shepard: *smiles* It's all right, Come here.
*Tali Pounce*

[AddoExAtrum]

Geth Hunter Alpha wrote...

Tali: Great, the elevators stuck
Shepard: Mmm, brings back memories.
Tali: I try not to think about it.
Shepard: Oh come on, it's not all bad. *slyly looks at Tali
Tali: What do you mean?
Shepard: Well... we are stuck here...
Tali: And?
Shepard: Alone....
Tali: Exactl...Oh! I... It's just that... I mean...
Shepard: *smiles* It's all right, Come here.
*Tali Pounce*

3 hours later the maintence crew opens the elevator to find 1 dead Quarian and a human crying over the corpse

Shepard: I told her it wasn't clean but she took off the mask anyway!!!!
Tali: RIP

[AddoExAtrum]

Ok I really am going now....

Chapter 12 of Mass Effect: Aftershock! Read it!

Full works on the 2nd link!

[vykvyper1]

wolfstanus wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

Yionel wrote...

damage incorp96 wrote...

Don't know about hacking the elevator, but would alway calibrate, yea calibrate the camera angles during the elevator rides with Tali.   

Thatd be funny in ME 3 scene you and Tali get stuck in a elevator...

I get the feeling that, after ME1, they (Garrus, Tali, and/or Shepard) would go insane if they got stuck in an elevator:blink:

Garus: So Tali want to talk about...
Tali: I swear to keela ill shoot you Gaurs if you finish the sentence.
Garus: Fine just trying to get a conversation going.
Shepard: Raises eyebrow
Tali: glares.

and by "glares" you mean the glare off her helmet
Garrus: AAGH! I can't see!

[PMorgan18]

Geth Hunter Alpha wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

Yionel wrote...

damage incorp96 wrote...

Don't know about hacking the elevator, but would alway calibrate, yea calibrate the camera angles during the elevator rides with Tali.   

Thatd be funny in ME 3 scene you and Tali get stuck in a elevator...

I get the feeling that, after ME1, they (Garrus, Tali, and/or Shepard) would go insane if they got stuck in an elevator:blink:

LOL i like the idea, if they made it to where if you romanced garrus or tali in ME2 and they survived it could be like a special tribute scene.

Tali: Great, the elevators stuck
Shepard: Mmm, brings back memories.
Tali: I try not to think about it.
Shepard: Oh come on, it's not all bad. *slyly looks at Tali
Tali: What do you mean?
Shepard: Well... we are stuck here...
Tali: And?
Shepard: Alone....
Tali: Exactl...Oh! I... It's just that... I mean...
Shepard: *smiles* It's all right, Come here.
*Tali Pounce*

Alright, giggity, giggity.

[FsDxRAGE]

AddoExAtrum wrote...

Geth Hunter Alpha wrote...

Tali: Great, the elevators stuck
Shepard: Mmm, brings back memories.
Tali: I try not to think about it.
Shepard: Oh come on, it's not all bad. *slyly looks at Tali
Tali: What do you mean?
Shepard: Well... we are stuck here...
Tali: And?
Shepard: Alone....
Tali: Exactl...Oh! I... It's just that... I mean...
Shepard: *smiles* It's all right, Come here.
*Tali Pounce*

3 hours later the maintence crew opens the elevator to find 1 dead Quarian and a human crying over the corpse

Shepard: I told her it wasn't clean but she took off the mask anyway!!!!
Tali: RIP

you are going to make me cry.....STOP IT!

[Exakil]

see you later Addo

[videowiz186]

Have created poll about Salvation or Destruction. Would like everyone who has read to vote. Here is link.

[damage incorp96]

wolfstanus wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

Yionel wrote...

damage incorp96 wrote...

Don't know about hacking the elevator, but would alway calibrate, yea calibrate the camera angles during the elevator rides with Tali.   

Thatd be funny in ME 3 scene you and Tali get stuck in a elevator...

I get the feeling that, after ME1, they (Garrus, Tali, and/or Shepard) would go insane if they got stuck in an elevator:blink:

Garus: So Tali want to talk about...
Tali: I swear to keela ill shoot you Gaurs if you finish the sentence.
Garus: Fine just trying to get a conversation going.
Shepard: Raises eyebrow
Tali: glares.

Shepard, Garrus, and Tali stuck in an elevator.

Garrus: So Tali, how about jumping up to that access pannel and getting us out of here?

Tali: I don't know Garrus, it looks kind of high.

Garrus: Oh, really? I heard you were quite the little jumper.

Shepard smacks Garrus in the back of the head

Tali scowls at Shepard

Garrus: Oh, right. Sorry forgot, we were swaping stories and...... starts mumbling about reach and flexibility and then trails off.......

[Angelraid]

AddoExAtrum wrote...

Geth Hunter Alpha wrote...

Tali: Great, the elevators stuck
Shepard: Mmm, brings back memories.
Tali: I try not to think about it.
Shepard: Oh come on, it's not all bad. *slyly looks at Tali
Tali: What do you mean?
Shepard: Well... we are stuck here...
Tali: And?
Shepard: Alone....
Tali: Exactl...Oh! I... It's just that... I mean...
Shepard: *smiles* It's all right, Come here.
*Tali Pounce*

3 hours later the maintence crew opens the elevator to find 1 dead Quarian and a human crying over the corpse

Shepard: I told her it wasn't clean but she took off the mask anyway!!!!
Tali: RIP

My shepard always keeps a healthy supply of immunoboostesr, herbal supplements and disenfectants in his survival pack for just such a situation.

[videowiz186]

Keelah Se'lai, Addo.

[wolfstanus]

vykvyper1 wrote...

wolfstanus wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

Yionel wrote...

damage incorp96 wrote...

Don't know about hacking the elevator, but would alway calibrate, yea calibrate the camera angles during the elevator rides with Tali.   

Thatd be funny in ME 3 scene you and Tali get stuck in a elevator...

I get the feeling that, after ME1, they (Garrus, Tali, and/or Shepard) would go insane if they got stuck in an elevator:blink:

Garus: So Tali want to talk about...
Tali: I swear to keela ill shoot you Gaurs if you finish the sentence.
Garus: Fine just trying to get a conversation going.
Shepard: Raises eyebrow
Tali: glares.

and by "glares" you mean the glare off her helmet
Garrus: AAGH! I can't see!

HAHA double meanings. Garus is used to those.

[videowiz186]

antilles333 wrote...

OH man..i finish reading all the pages and more fanfic to read.

On a side note: Tali totally saved me from getting murdered by an YMIR Mech right now. Quite thankful!

Do not forget to read mine!

[XxCITIZENxX]

bump

[SirEmilCrane]

Anyone noticed that in ME1 Tali goes from being very weak to being a veritable god of war? I think she has a higher body count than I do, and I'm playing as a soldier.

She does insane amounts of shotgun dmg, has as many shileds as an armature and can literally make your guns explode

Modifié par SirEmilCrane, 21 février 2010 - 04:04 .