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RevanKun123 wrote...
Jake71887 wrote...
RevanKun123 wrote...
You are worse than a tumor, you just won't stop until I give up or/and die.
No, I'm pretty sure I'd keep going even if you were dead
So I will be harass even in my death?
Do you even know the word "shame"?
MarineBorn wrote...
Damn.....Thats deep and very touching.RevanKun123 wrote...
This isn't a haiku but at least I tried do writte something :
There was much more to the human and the quarian than the legends hold.
A feathery touch
A gentle gesture
A dream of pureness
A simple love
There is a darker side to everything.
She know it better than anyone.
While her heart brimmed with love for the commander, She also had been filled with a lust for him so raw it pained just as it satisfied, so great it consumed her.
She thirsted for the pleasure that would braid itself into her veins, to run in dark and seamless line between platelets and oxygen.
It was a strange feeling, this subtle joy, a confidence in something more. She had possessed it before...but was it this intense? she doesn't remember. It changed her, now, little by little.
It made her tremble. It made her feel like she was bursting with energy, ready to leap into song as if this was some ancient tale told by a fireside. It made her weak, yet it made her strong.
She was vulnerable, very vulnerable, concerning that. And yet, these feelings gave her a sense of complete purpose and contentment. Restlessness became a feature of the past when she dowelled on it.
A feeling, a sense of knowledge spoken of in many tales. A feeling rebuked and rejoiced in. Described in every way, in the blooming of a flower, in the birth of new life.
It was agonizing that she couldn't have him all for herself.
She was being selfish and it wasn't supposed to be like that, it wasn't right.
She watched him.
She watched him for so long...
Still in her selfish heart.
It wasn't enough.
But even so, she would still love her god of battle.
Shepard.
Guest_MarineBorn_*
Poems in this thread, there probably not going to do very well......Considering are local inhabitants.....and jake(WTF JAKE DIED WOMEN!!!!!???)RevanKun123 wrote...
MarineBorn wrote...
Damn.....Thats deep and very touching.RevanKun123 wrote...
This isn't a haiku but at least I tried do writte something :
There was much more to the human and the quarian than the legends hold.
A feathery touch
A gentle gesture
A dream of pureness
A simple love
There is a darker side to everything.
She know it better than anyone.
While her heart brimmed with love for the commander, She also had been filled with a lust for him so raw it pained just as it satisfied, so great it consumed her.
She thirsted for the pleasure that would braid itself into her veins, to run in dark and seamless line between platelets and oxygen.
It was a strange feeling, this subtle joy, a confidence in something more. She had possessed it before...but was it this intense? she doesn't remember. It changed her, now, little by little.
It made her tremble. It made her feel like she was bursting with energy, ready to leap into song as if this was some ancient tale told by a fireside. It made her weak, yet it made her strong.
She was vulnerable, very vulnerable, concerning that. And yet, these feelings gave her a sense of complete purpose and contentment. Restlessness became a feature of the past when she dowelled on it.
A feeling, a sense of knowledge spoken of in many tales. A feeling rebuked and rejoiced in. Described in every way, in the blooming of a flower, in the birth of new life.
It was agonizing that she couldn't have him all for herself.
She was being selfish and it wasn't supposed to be like that, it wasn't right.
She watched him.
She watched him for so long...
Still in her selfish heart.
It wasn't enough.
But even so, she would still love her god of battle.
Shepard.
Thank you, I tried.
HK01 wrote...
Wow, Jake and Revan have been trying to outwit each other for 1300 pages now(maybe more).
MarineBorn wrote...
Poems in this thread, there probably not going to do very well......Considering are local inhabitants.....and jake(WTF JAKE DIED WOMEN!!!!!???)
And i have to go, I'll see ya'll later on today. Stay gold Tali...Stay gold.....er violet...whatever bye!
this is an odd conversation I walked into...MarineBorn wrote...
Poems in this thread, there probably not going to do very well......Considering are local inhabitants.....and jake(WTF JAKE DIED WOMEN!!!!!???)RevanKun123 wrote...
MarineBorn wrote...
Damn.....Thats deep and very touching.RevanKun123 wrote...
This isn't a haiku but at least I tried do writte something :
There was much more to the human and the quarian than the legends hold.
A feathery touch
A gentle gesture
A dream of pureness
A simple love
There is a darker side to everything.
She know it better than anyone.
While her heart brimmed with love for the commander, She also had been filled with a lust for him so raw it pained just as it satisfied, so great it consumed her.
She thirsted for the pleasure that would braid itself into her veins, to run in dark and seamless line between platelets and oxygen.
It was a strange feeling, this subtle joy, a confidence in something more. She had possessed it before...but was it this intense? she doesn't remember. It changed her, now, little by little.
It made her tremble. It made her feel like she was bursting with energy, ready to leap into song as if this was some ancient tale told by a fireside. It made her weak, yet it made her strong.
She was vulnerable, very vulnerable, concerning that. And yet, these feelings gave her a sense of complete purpose and contentment. Restlessness became a feature of the past when she dowelled on it.
A feeling, a sense of knowledge spoken of in many tales. A feeling rebuked and rejoiced in. Described in every way, in the blooming of a flower, in the birth of new life.
It was agonizing that she couldn't have him all for herself.
She was being selfish and it wasn't supposed to be like that, it wasn't right.
She watched him.
She watched him for so long...
Still in her selfish heart.
It wasn't enough.
But even so, she would still love her god of battle.
Shepard.
Thank you, I tried.
And i have to go, I'll see ya'll later on today. Stay gold Tali...Stay gold.....er violet...whatever bye!
Jake71887 wrote...
HK01 wrote...
Wow, Jake and Revan have been trying to outwit each other for 1300 pages now(maybe more).
Trying to outwit each other? I'm pretty sure Revan has no wit...
Well whenever I walk into a forum, there is always two knuckleheads arguing about nothingRevanKun123 wrote...
Jake71887 wrote...
HK01 wrote...
Wow, Jake and Revan have been trying to outwit each other for 1300 pages now(maybe more).
Trying to outwit each other? I'm pretty sure Revan has no wit...
That right.
LegendaryAvenger wrote...
Well whenever I walk into a forum, there is always two knuckleheads arguing about nothingRevanKun123 wrote...
Jake71887 wrote...
HK01 wrote...
Wow, Jake and Revan have been trying to outwit each other for 1300 pages now(maybe more).
Trying to outwit each other? I'm pretty sure Revan has no wit...
That right.
couldn't have done it without youR34P3RR3D33M3R wrote...
We got this thread stickied? Holy hell, that's awesome!
Of course, this was only possible with the amazing biotic god's help.
I think things, and they happen. But I'll admit, I didn't think this would get a sticky.
R34P3RR3D33M3R wrote...
We got this thread stickied? Holy hell, that's awesome!
Of course, this was only possible with the amazing biotic god's help.
I think things, and they happen. But I'll admit, I didn't think this would get a sticky.
ahh jake, what would we do without youJake71887 wrote...
LegendaryAvenger wrote...
Well whenever I walk into a forum, there is always two knuckleheads arguing about nothingRevanKun123 wrote...
Jake71887 wrote...
HK01 wrote...
Wow, Jake and Revan have been trying to outwit each other for 1300 pages now(maybe more).
Trying to outwit each other? I'm pretty sure Revan has no wit...
That right.
We don't argue, I tease her, and she pretends she doesn't love it
UFOash wrote...
OK, Listen up everybody.
Yes, This thread is a Sticky!
Yes, Its Cool & Awesome!
Bla bla bla bla bla bla blaaaaaaaaaaa!
Lets not have every other post referencing it, eh?
arent you the cynical type?UFOash wrote...
OK, Listen up everybody.
Yes, This thread is a Sticky!
Yes, Its Cool & Awesome!
Bla bla bla bla bla bla blaaaaaaaaaaa!
Lets not have every other post referencing it, eh?
Guest_starwarschewy_*
Daskworx wrote...
Awe I missed it going past 2000! Still good to see it going strong!
@ revan: that poem is awesome!
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