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[Azint]

Twice now she follows
For her love I have chosen
No one else but her

[knight5923]

caressing her skin,

goosebumps rise on her body,

her lips curl smiling

[NuclearBuddha]

MarineBorn wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

MarineBorn wrote...

knight5923 wrote...

bright eyes shining forth,
scanning over my armor,
staring hungrily;)

YO HO HO! ...I like the last bit....makes me.......pitch a tent...(I'm sitting in my rack)

Lemme try.

A reason to fight.
A reason for might.
She gives me light.

Need two more syllables in the second line.

A reson to fight.
A reason for might.
She granted me her light.

See emphasis above.

[FlashedMyDrive]

CrAzyManMike wrote...

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish Shepard were here

Awesome, but last line is 1 too long.

[vykvyper1]

precise with her tech
yet so nervous with her words
that makes her special

shall I keep going?

[Felipe 058]

Hey everyone, just getting back on.

So I was visiting the Citadel today, and I headed into the Dark Star and started talking to this turian in there; turned out he's a groundskeeper on the Presidium. I had overheard these two krogan earlier talking about if there were fish in the lakes on the Presidium, so I figured I'd ask this turian, just out of curiosity, you know. Well it turns out there are no fish, as the lakes are just reservoirs for the Presidium's water supply. I found this strange and a little disgusting since all sorts of people, tourists mostly, throw their garbage into the lakes. He said it gets filtered and processed first, which makes sense because, as he said, if any salarian or human bacteria get into the water, any turians or quarians who drink from the water supply are going to go down pretty fast. Then he said something that I felt was indicative of the predicament concerning Talimancers everywhere:

"Everything would be so much simpler if we all had the same DNA. But nooo, the universe loooves diversity."

So this is what I have to say to that: frak you universe, and your little god, too! <_<

[NuclearBuddha]

CrAzyManMike wrote...

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish Shepard were here

Win.

Edit:  Or would be, if it was done right.  Whoops.  I love the idea, though.

Modifié par NuclearBuddha, 09 mars 2010 - 04:43 .

[CrAzyManMike]

Others see a mask

Fail to notice beauty

I see so much more

[Azint]

She is fictional
Character from Mass Effect
Yet I adore her

[sergio71785]

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

CrAzyManMike wrote...

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish Shepard were here

Awesome, but last line is 1 too long.

Yeah, that one's really nice. He can just get rid of the "I" and it'll be perfect.

Modifié par sergio71785, 09 mars 2010 - 04:42 .

[knight5923]

MarineBorn wrote...

NuclearBuddha wrote...

MarineBorn wrote...

knight5923 wrote...

bright eyes shining forth,
scanning over my armor,
staring hungrily;)

YO HO HO! ...I like the last bit....makes me.......pitch a tent...(I'm sitting in my rack)

Lemme try.

A reason to fight.
A reason for might.
She gives me light.

Need two more syllables in the second line.

A reson to fight.
A reason for might.
She granted me her light.

Just swap the 2nd and 3rd lines;)

[BigKahuna25]

when in love's embrace

you should not let down your guard

they often will pounce

[CrAzyManMike]

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

CrAzyManMike wrote...

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish Shepard were here

Awesome, but last line is 1 too long.

crap...
um

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish Shep'rd were here

can I do that?.
Edit...nvm..hold on

Modifié par CrAzyManMike, 09 mars 2010 - 04:43 .

[knight5923]

MarineBorn wrote...

Ok, I'm going to bed. This damn cold is starting to kill me. See ya'll tommorow.

Keelah Se 'lai

Feel better buddy,
Keelah Se'lai

[vykvyper1]

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

Someone needs to make a special, #100 Haiku when we get there.

one-hundred haikus
all for miss Tali'Zorah
will we get there soon?

Could use a better last line.

one-hundred haikus
all for miss Tali'Zorah
"...totally worth it."
 

eh? eh?

Modifié par vykvyper1, 09 mars 2010 - 04:46 .

[CrAzyManMike]

CrAzyManMike wrote...

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

CrAzyManMike wrote...

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish Shepard were here

Awesome, but last line is 1 too long.

crap...
um

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish Shep'rd were here

can I do that?.
Edit...nvm..hold on

kk lemme try this again

Friends killed around me
For some data on a star
I wish he were here...

[BigKahuna25]

oh god not that one

the four nostril one is bad

no more nightcrawler.

[sergio71785]

vykvyper1 wrote...

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

Someone needs to make a special, #100 Haiku when we get there.

one-hundred haikus
all for miss Tali'Zorah
will we get there soon?

Could use a better last line.

one-hundred haikus
all for miss Tali'Zorah
"it was so worth it."
 

eh? eh?

That's pretty good. I'd change the final line to "totally worth it" though, since that's what she actually said. 

Modifié par sergio71785, 09 mars 2010 - 04:44 .

[Azint]

I have met someone
A rather charming young girl
Her name is Tali

[vykvyper1]

sergio71785 wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

vykvyper1 wrote...

FlashedMyDrive wrote...

Someone needs to make a special, #100 Haiku when we get there.

one-hundred haikus
all for miss Tali'Zorah
will we get there soon?

Could use a better last line.

one-hundred haikus
all for miss Tali'Zorah
"...totally worth it."
 

eh? eh?

That's pretty good. I'd change the final line to "totally worth it" though, since that's what she actually said. 

okay! good catch btw

[CrAzyManMike]

She's cold in battle

But when it comes to Shepard

She is loveable