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[BigKahuna25]

Felipe 058 wrote...
I really enjoyed that, but I rather think Shepard would say "I love you, too" instead of "I do to, Tali." I mean, Shepard's great and all, but that's a tad narcissistic, don't you think? 

yay! i poked fun at that too, but i didn't use any big words... just said he was a dick.

[Himmelstor]

Himmelstor wrote...

Shameless Self Promotion:
Doctor prescribes fanfiction!
Part Nine of Act III: Descent is up in blog!
Please read, comment, and enjoy!
Lazy Link: http://social.biowar...1740/blog/3469/

Carry over. With music:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ktff3bZpux8&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hjQ_xZMybPM

[knight5923]

sergio71785 wrote...

Tali: I love you

Shepard: I know 

Tali: ...um...

Tali: ..that's...it? You're not going to say it back? 

Shepard: No no, you don't understand! It was a reference to an old, famous classical earth vid! 

Tali: 

Shepard: Tali, come on, I was just playing. You know I love you too. See? I said it! I love you! <3

Tali:  *Quarian Pounce*

Totally use the "i love you" "I know" in the most recent chapter of my fanfic^_^
I tried to make it subtle, though, so it wouldn't be too distracting. Still, made me smileB)

[DarchAngelDavid]

Himmelstor wrote...

sergio71785 wrote...

Shepard: So... why'd you name your drone Chikktika anyway? 

Tali: Um you know, just... a name I liked.

Shepard: Oh really? I think there's more to it. 

Tali: You're going to make fun of me

Shepard: Come on, you know you can trust me. 

Tali: Well... okay. When I was very young, my father gave me a doll of one of the native animals of Rannoch--it was very similar to a human's "teddy bear". That was the name he gave it, and what I always called it. It was one of the very few gifts I remember him giving me.

Shepard: Aww, Tali, I wouldn't make fun of that. What happened to it?

Tali: It may sound silly, but I always kept it among my things, even as an adult. I had it with me back on the original  Normandy. I lost it when the Normandy was attacked. 

Shepard:  

*Three hours later, Shepard has secretly taken the shuttle to the Normandy crash site, and is digging through the engineering lockers among the wreckage* 

---

I actually think I may develop this into a (short) fanfic! *snip evil symbol*

Is...very good dialogue...saved to 'thread improv' file...

I am really liking this so far.  I hope you contiue with the story. 

[Felipe 058]

knight5923 wrote...

Felipe 058 wrote...

FsDxRAGE wrote...

sergio71785 wrote...

The first phase of Tali undressing would involve her removing the cloth wrappings.
And the first phase of removing the fabric, would be unhooking that metal clasp below her neck. 

Tali begins uwrapping her purple cloth that weaves around her curvy body.
"Shepard, before we fight the Reapers..." Tali begins but is cut off by Shepard who helps her with the cloth bringing his body close to hers. "I...I want you to see my face one last time," she wispers stroaking his arm as he helps her with the cloth. "This may be the last time we see eachother." She stares into his peircing eyes through her purple veil. He gracefuly looks up into her face smiling. His hands slip under her hood and Tali grabs them half nervous. "I love you Shepard," she says barely audiblly as she felt the Normandy's cool air brush against her bare face. She opened her eyes and looked at her commander, her savior.
"I do to Tali," he said in his deep yet caring voice wiping a tear off her gentle face. She inhaled the liberating air and the comforting  scent of her commander.
"Shepard... I, I," she stuttered, but was cut off by Shepard pressing his finger agaist her soft lips unzipping her suit. She was nervous, but at the same time she was in heaven. The fresh air lapped against the bare skin on her back and and moved down to her feet as her suit fell against the ground....

You guys can take it over from there...

I really enjoyed that, but I rather think Shepard would say "I love you, too" instead of "I do to, Tali." I mean, Shepard's great and all, but that's a tad narcissistic, don't you think? 

lol ya, doesn't quite live up to the majesty and subtle romaticism that is "....Come here:mellow:"

Ugh, Shepard sounded like a total douche when he said that. No, I take that back. Mark Meer sounded like a total douche when he said that.

[Felipe 058]

runescapeguy9 wrote...


Reposting for the beauty.

This is what I thought when I saw this: "Awesome, Shepard is drowning and Tali is just staring down at him casually. Frak you, Tali, you just killed me :crying:"

[videowiz186]

Have returned. Good to see everyone. Thread good from looks. Anything missed?

[Himmelstor]

Felipe 058 wrote...

runescapeguy9 wrote...

*snip*
Reposting for the beauty.

This is what I thought when I saw this: "Awesome, Shepard is drowning and Tali is just staring down at him casually. Frak you, Tali, you just killed me :crying:"

*Takes notes*
Won't be long before men in white coats come for you, Felipe 058...

[Sleepicub09]

videowiz186 wrote...

Have returned. Good to see everyone. Thread good from looks. Anything missed?

no you didn't miss anything and yes the thread is actually peaceful

[MasterMegatron]

Felipe 058 wrote...

runescapeguy9 wrote...


Reposting for the beauty.

This is what I thought when I saw this: "Awesome, Shepard is drowning and Tali is just staring down at him casually. Frak you, Tali, you just killed me :crying:"

Huh. Could have sworn I hired Thane to do that...

[knight5923]

Felipe 058 wrote...

knight5923 wrote...

Felipe 058 wrote...
I really enjoyed that, but I rather think Shepard would say "I love you, too" instead of "I do to, Tali." I mean, Shepard's great and all, but that's a tad narcissistic, don't you think? 

lol ya, doesn't quite live up to the majesty and subtle romaticism that is "....Come here:mellow:"

Ugh, Shepard sounded like a total douche when he said that. No, I take that back. Mark Meer sounded like a total douche when he said that.

Ya, but I'd throw just as much blame to the writers on that one. They did some remarkable things in ME2, but "Come here"? I say more romatic things while washing my armpits:?

(i'm a very sensual bather, apparently lol)

[Himmelstor]

videowiz186 wrote...

Have returned. Good to see everyone. Thread good from looks. Anything missed?

Several improvised scenes, discussion about merits of pirating (off-topic), and pictures.

[The_KFD_Case]

videowiz186 wrote...

Have returned. Good to see everyone. Thread good from looks. Anything missed?

Hello Vid! Glad to see you back.

There's been some discussion about DRM systems, the odds of BioWare revealing Tali's face in ME3/whether more than just her face will be revealed, and a bit of spontaneous fanfic in the thread.

[BigKahuna25]

Sleepicub09 wrote...

videowiz186 wrote...

Have returned. Good to see everyone. Thread good from looks. Anything missed?

no you didn't miss anything and yes the thread is actually peaceful

is there something i could do to incite you to violence?

[knight5923]

runescapeguy9 wrote...


Reposting for the beauty.

Oh my ...... that is something else;)  (and I don't say "oh my" too often!)

[videowiz186]

Sleepicub09 wrote...

videowiz186 wrote...

Have returned. Good to see everyone. Thread good from looks. Anything missed?

no you didn't miss anything and yes the thread is actually peaceful

Good. Currently writing next chapter in Salvation or Destruction. Not sure if will be able to finish tonight, but will be finished tomorrow.

[knight5923]

runescapeguy9 wrote...

knight5923 wrote...
I say more romatic things while washing my armpits:?

I was gonna say taking a crap, but I figured washing was a slightly less offensive visual^_^

[Felipe 058]

Himmelstor wrote...

Felipe 058 wrote...

runescapeguy9 wrote...

*snip*
Reposting for the beauty.

This is what I thought when I saw this: "Awesome, Shepard is drowning and Tali is just staring down at him casually. Frak you, Tali, you just killed me :crying:"

*Takes notes*
Won't be long before men in white coats come for you, Felipe 058...

That's odd since I'm one of those men in white coats.

[Sleepicub09]

BigKahuna25 wrote...

Sleepicub09 wrote...

videowiz186 wrote...

Have returned. Good to see everyone. Thread good from looks. Anything missed?

no you didn't miss anything and yes the thread is actually peaceful

is there something i could do to incite you to violence?

I don't want violence its just that this thread surprisingly peaceful and come use some peaceful music to go with it so here http://www.youtube.c...u/2/-XUcmK0Ec6U

[videowiz186]

Appreciate welcomes and updates Doctor and KFD.

[Himmelstor]

Felipe 058 wrote...

Himmelstor wrote...

Felipe 058 wrote...

runescapeguy9 wrote...

*snip*
Reposting for the beauty.

This is what I thought when I saw this: "Awesome, Shepard is drowning and Tali is just staring down at him casually. Frak you, Tali, you just killed me :crying:"

*Takes notes*
Won't be long before men in white coats come for you, Felipe 058...

That's odd since I'm one of those men in white coats.

Oh? Then is too late...*Fades into shadows*

[knight5923]

videowiz186 wrote...

Appreciate welcomes and updates Doctor and KFD.

belated welcome:D

[sergio71785]

 

Modifié par sergio71785, 19 mars 2010 - 04:19 .