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[The_KFD_Case]

Katharr wrote...

greetings KFD and i have to admit that "star raker" is just awesome even
if it sometimes reminds me of vnv nation, but in a very very good way.


*edit 'cause i messed up the quotes before

Hi Katharr! Thanks; I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I felt like I was bumping up against a stone wall inspiration wise last night, and then I decided to do it the old fashioned "slave method" way: Bit by bit. The end result, "Star Raker", sounds better to my ears now when I listen to it after the final dress rehearsal before I uploaded it to YouTube.

[Jake71887]

ControlFreak12 wrote...

Jake71887 wrote...

Somebody1003 wrote...

Alanosborn1991 wrote...

Alanosborn1991 wrote...

Felipe 058 wrote...

HOLY!

Very big.

That's what she said 

YOU ARE BANISHED!

Lolz wut? 

[Shazzammer2]

out of curiosity. How old are you folks?

[Goat_Shepard]

Darth Cheesecake wrote...

DrathanGervaise wrote...

Shepard and Tali's relationship will make human/quarian relationships more popular.

Discuss.

Yes they will cause a trend!...and a few accidental deaths...but still YAY TALI!!!

[Flaargman117]

Alphyn wrote...

Darth Cheesecake wrote...

...I just read that abomination....the writer should be killed!...to death!!!

I don't mind the typos and grammical errors. Obviously, this was written by someone whose first language wasn't English. It's just that the writer has watched FAR too much porn.

Seriously, if you think that "blowing your load" onto someone's face is romantic... just leave this planet and don't come back. At all.

What if it come out in one big heart shape?

[Alphyn]

Phil725 wrote...

Well everyone is different, maybe some people would rather write pornographic fan fiction than so called "romance" dialogue.  I don't see anything wrong with getting more explicit than underwear hugging and touching gingerly or something.  I don't really think its fair to hate on something just because you would rather read romance than porn.  Its just aimed at a different audience.

That said, I'm not defending this specific piece.  There is a lot wrong with it, more than just a quick proofreading worth

I have nothing against writing explicit moves into a story, as long as it's done right.

[Grif101]

Jake71887 wrote...

Grif101 wrote...
If you absolutely want I could start yet another discussion on the modern military and geopolitics...........even another Canadian discussion:devil:

Mods frown upon those discussions, don't start 

I feel I have to ask no matter how cliched this question is.........."or what?"

Modifié par Grif101, 20 mars 2010 - 11:38 .

[Jake71887]

DrathanGervaise wrote...

Jake71887 wrote...

Grif101 wrote...
If you absolutely want I could start yet another discussion on the modern military and geopolitics...........even another Canadian discussion:devil:

Mods frown upon those discussions, don't start 

Needs moar "Getting Uppity?" picture.

Site's broken and I didn't save the picture! 

[AventuroLegendary]

Alphyn wrote...

Darth Cheesecake wrote...

...I just read that abomination....the writer should be killed!...to death!!!

I don't mind the typos and grammical errors. Obviously, this was written by someone whose first language wasn't English. It's just that the writer has watched FAR too much porn.

Seriously, if you think that "blowing your load" onto someone's face is romantic... just leave this planet and don't come back. At all.

Can I inspect this "abomination"?

[Alphyn]

Shazzammer2 wrote...

out of curiosity. How old are you folks?

49.

[ControlFreak12]

Shazzammer2 wrote...

out of curiosity. How old are you folks?

19. 20 come August.

[Felipe 058]

Shazzammer2 wrote...

out of curiosity. How old are you folks?

Ye Olde

[AventuroLegendary]

DrathanGervaise wrote...

Shazzammer2 wrote...

out of curiosity. How old are you folks?

18 in 8 days.

Perfection has no age.

[The_KFD_Case]

Flaargman117 wrote...

Why would a feeling creep DOWN his back onto his HEAD.
Unless he is upside down?

You may be thinking of the wrong head. Human male physiology has two "heads". One connected to the torso by a neck, and one at the tip of the male reproductive organs.

Modifié par The_KFD_Case, 20 mars 2010 - 11:39 .

[Alphyn]

Flaargman117 wrote...

What if it come out in one big heart shape?

No. Just no.
Shut up. Go away. Bye bye.

[Shazzammer2]

Darth Cheesecake wrote...
....no I mean a few Quarians could get sick and die not from racial violence....why would you think that?

I understood what you said, just that I was thinking to myself. Quarians are looked down upon. I mean, its possible most races regard Quarians lower than the vorcha even. Its a sad thought....

[Alphyn]

LegendaryAvenger wrote...

Can I inspect this "abomination"?

www.fanfiction.net/s/5828676/1/Mass_Effect_Guardians

Don't say I didn't warn you.