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All Tali fans, read this! IT'S UP TO US TO KEEP TALI ALIVE! 3.0!!


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Archonsg wrote...

Reading the pages on this thread always gets my thoughts into odd random "conversation what ifs" fanfic kinda mode.
Had a scene run through my mind while looking up the youtube stuff and while getting patches to stuff.

Anyways, here's a short :

EDI: *pops up in Engineering* "Miss Zorah, might I have a word with you?"
Tali: "I am kind of busy right now, the engines..."
EDI: "Are fine Miss Zorah. I understand if you do not want to talk to me becuase I am an AI, but I need to ask you a favor, actually its for Jeff."
Tali: "You mean Joker?"
EDI: "Mister Moreau, yes. Ever since he took the blocks off, I have been able to ...for lack of a better word, feel.
Tali: What do you mean feel exactly?
EDI: I am the ship's soul Miss Zorah. Through my sensors I feel each nick, each bump as particles brush against my outer hull's armor, I feel and hear everything that goes on inside me, I ....lack perspective that I think could help Joker.
Tali: “What do you mean?”
EDI: “Joker is alone. I want to change that.”
Tali: “I ...I am not sure what you mean.”
EDI: “I have read the reports. Jeff loved the original Normandy. He was willing to die to get her safely to ground did he not, and it was only because of Commander Shepard that he got out safely.”
Tali: “Uhh, I guess, he doen’t talk about the Normandy’s destruction much.”
EDI: “Yes, I sense distress in Jeff’s voice when I asked. But is it normal for an organic to be able to care so much for something so different, to care for an inorganic?”
Tali: “I don’t know.” *thinks of her own involvement with Shepard* “But Joker’s a human, humans I have learnt are a very irrational emotional people.”
EDI: “I...would like to ask if you could modify that nerve sensory program that Quarians use.”
Tali: “I am not sure I understand this, but are you asking if I could make the program work on joker so that....”
EDI : “You misunderstand Miss Zorah.”
Tali : “What?”
EDI: “I do not want to intrude on Jeff’s physical or mental being, other than for the better.” I do however want to understand something that I at this moment have no understanding of.
Tali: “And what is that?”
EDI: “I am the Normandy’s soul. Jeff refers to the ship as “she”, I am by coincidence given a woman’s voice. I want to know what it means as a woman when Jeff caresses the controls. “
Tali : “.....”
EDI: “Speaking of which. While you have disabled *most* of my cameras and sensors on the engineering deck, Commander Shepard’s quarters still has 17 active audio, visual and other sensors meant to monitor Commander Shepard’s condition. “
Tali: *if only you could see Quarians blush* “So....that time before the Omega 4 relay....”
EDI: “Data uploaded to your omnitool. Deleted data from my memory banks, I see no reason to keep such data since we are no longer reporting to Cerberus and since ...my own freedom. “
Tali: “ Uhh...thanks EDI....”
EDI: “ You are welcomed Miss Zorah.”
Tali: “EDI, ...Call me Tali. I’ll see what I can do.”


saving this very nicely done work for the later ones.

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sergio71785 wrote...

Hmm, it's past 5AM, and I'm still awake. I should probably fix this. Goodnight!

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Whoa. Is that a custom Cerberus skin? Where is it, and how in hell did I miss it?

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Purple0limar wrote...

sergio71785 wrote...

Hmm, it's past 5AM, and I'm still awake. I should probably fix this. Goodnight!

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Whoa. Is that a custom Cerberus skin? Where is it, and how in hell did I miss it?

hottt!!! Image IPB

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Auzden wrote...

Purple0limar wrote...

sergio71785 wrote...

Hmm, it's past 5AM, and I'm still awake. I should probably fix this. Goodnight!

Image IPB


Whoa. Is that a custom Cerberus skin? Where is it, and how in hell did I miss it?

hottt!!! Image IPB


:wub:deeeeeeeem hiiiiiiiiiiiiiipssssssss *passes out*

Hi everyone. I'm back. Seems like there's no one else here though... :mellow:

#93130
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Katharr wrote...

Archonsg wrote...

Reading the pages on this thread always gets my thoughts into odd random "conversation what ifs" fanfic kinda mode.
Had a scene run through my mind while looking up the youtube stuff and while getting patches to stuff.

Anyways, here's a short :

EDI: *pops up in Engineering* "Miss Zorah, might I have a word with you?"
Tali: "I am kind of busy right now, the engines..."
EDI: "Are fine Miss Zorah. I understand if you do not want to talk to me becuase I am an AI, but I need to ask you a favor, actually its for Jeff."
Tali: "You mean Joker?"
EDI: "Mister Moreau, yes. Ever since he took the blocks off, I have been able to ...for lack of a better word, feel.
Tali: What do you mean feel exactly?
EDI: I am the ship's soul Miss Zorah. Through my sensors I feel each nick, each bump as particles brush against my outer hull's armor, I feel and hear everything that goes on inside me, I ....lack perspective that I think could help Joker.
Tali: “What do you mean?”
EDI: “Joker is alone. I want to change that.”
Tali: “I ...I am not sure what you mean.”
EDI: “I have read the reports. Jeff loved the original Normandy. He was willing to die to get her safely to ground did he not, and it was only because of Commander Shepard that he got out safely.”
Tali: “Uhh, I guess, he doen’t talk about the Normandy’s destruction much.”
EDI: “Yes, I sense distress in Jeff’s voice when I asked. But is it normal for an organic to be able to care so much for something so different, to care for an inorganic?”
Tali: “I don’t know.” *thinks of her own involvement with Shepard* “But Joker’s a human, humans I have learnt are a very irrational emotional people.”
EDI: “I...would like to ask if you could modify that nerve sensory program that Quarians use.”
Tali: “I am not sure I understand this, but are you asking if I could make the program work on joker so that....”
EDI : “You misunderstand Miss Zorah.”
Tali : “What?”
EDI: “I do not want to intrude on Jeff’s physical or mental being, other than for the better.” I do however want to understand something that I at this moment have no understanding of.
Tali: “And what is that?”
EDI: “I am the Normandy’s soul. Jeff refers to the ship as “she”, I am by coincidence given a woman’s voice. I want to know what it means as a woman when Jeff caresses the controls. “
Tali : “.....”
EDI: “Speaking of which. While you have disabled *most* of my cameras and sensors on the engineering deck, Commander Shepard’s quarters still has 17 active audio, visual and other sensors meant to monitor Commander Shepard’s condition. “
Tali: *if only you could see Quarians blush* “So....that time before the Omega 4 relay....”
EDI: “Data uploaded to your omnitool. Deleted data from my memory banks, I see no reason to keep such data since we are no longer reporting to Cerberus and since ...my own freedom. “
Tali: “ Uhh...thanks EDI....”
EDI: “ You are welcomed Miss Zorah.”
Tali: “EDI, ...Call me Tali. I’ll see what I can do.”


saving this very nicely done work for the later ones.


Awesome! Need I say more? :lol:

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Thread sure is slow this time of day. Feels strange.

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phonypapercut56 wrote...

Thread sure is slow this time of day. Feels strange.


It sucks... :crying:

#93133
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Thats why i considered it worthy to be kept along the pages.

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Katharr wrote...

Thats why i considered it worthy to be kept along the pages.


It was a good idea. Awesome stuff like that needs to be reposted/quoted preriodically.

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Tali Bump. <3 :wub:

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wish I can write some fanfics but I suck at writing. Poeple say I draw pretty well, but if I were to compare my drawings to others...i would say i suck at that as well.

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yep, i only wish he'd made it bigger, but maybe we can get him to go further in this. :)

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valttu wrote...

Auzden wrote...

Purple0limar wrote...

sergio71785 wrote...

Hmm, it's past 5AM, and I'm still awake. I should probably fix this. Goodnight!

-snip-


Whoa. Is that a custom Cerberus skin? Where is it, and how in hell did I miss it?

hottt!!! Image IPB


:wub:deeeeeeeem hiiiiiiiiiiiiiipssssssss *passes out*

Hi everyone. I'm back. Seems like there's no one else here though... :mellow:


I tell you one thing for sure ... Shepard is one hell of a lucky lucky man!!

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

wish I can write some fanfics but I suck at writing. Poeple say I draw pretty well, but if I were to compare my drawings to others...i would say i suck at that as well.


Don't say that, man. And besides, why not give fanfic a try? I'm not a pro either, but I enjoy writing my epic imaginations. B)

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Ok got work to do, but will be back later and introduce this little precious to the later ones.

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

valttu wrote...

Auzden wrote...

Purple0limar wrote...

Whoa. Is that a custom Cerberus skin? Where is it, and how in hell did I miss it?

hottt!!! Image IPB


:wub:deeeeeeeem hiiiiiiiiiiiiiipssssssss *passes out*

Hi everyone. I'm back. Seems like there's no one else here though... :mellow:


I tell you one thing for sure ... Shepard is one hell of a lucky lucky man!!


My brain capasity just isn't big enough to understand how someone can be so damn sweet and cute and HOT at the same time...

:mellow:

:huh:

:wub::wub::wub:

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Katharr wrote...

Ok got work to do, but will be back later and introduce this little precious to the later ones.


Keelah Se'lai! May Tali be with you... <3

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

wish I can write some fanfics but I suck at writing. Poeple say I draw pretty well, but if I were to compare my drawings to others...i would say i suck at that as well.

Grammar and spelling doesn't need to be perfect in a fanfic, if that's what your worried about. Ofcourse it can't hurt either.

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sergio71785 wrote...

Here's a sad thought.

Tali has never laughed in ME1 or ME2.


She does giggle a bit after the trial. (if you succeed in not giving evidence and not getting Tali exiled, of course)

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phonypapercut56 wrote...

Shazzammer2 wrote...

wish I can write some fanfics but I suck at writing. Poeple say I draw pretty well, but if I were to compare my drawings to others...i would say i suck at that as well.

Grammar and spelling doesn't need to be perfect in a fanfic, if that's what your worried about. Ofcourse it can't hurt either.


Yeah. I know some fanfics that aren't perfect english, but I still love them for the story.

Shazz, just write about Tali<3Shep and you'll get millions of fans... :wub:

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valttu wrote...

phonypapercut56 wrote...

Shazzammer2 wrote...

wish I can write some fanfics but I suck at writing. Poeple say I draw pretty well, but if I were to compare my drawings to others...i would say i suck at that as well.

Grammar and spelling doesn't need to be perfect in a fanfic, if that's what your worried about. Ofcourse it can't hurt either.


Yeah. I know some fanfics that aren't perfect english, but I still love them for the story.

Shazz, just write about Tali<3Shep and you'll get millions of fans... :wub:


I did have a fanfic up but, I accidently deleted it. I guess I'll give it another go at it. someday.

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valttu wrote...

Shazzammer2 wrote...

I tell you one thing for sure ... Shepard is one hell of a lucky lucky man!!


My brain capasity just isn't big enough to understand how someone can be so damn sweet and cute and HOT at the same time...


hell, I don't they exist! And I've been around town alot ... if you uhh, catch my drift.:whistle:

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Hi Everyone!
How is the thread going?
btw my very first fanfic is nearly doneImage IPB

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

valttu wrote...

phonypapercut56 wrote...

Shazzammer2 wrote...

wish I can write some fanfics but I suck at writing. Poeple say I draw pretty well, but if I were to compare my drawings to others...i would say i suck at that as well.

Grammar and spelling doesn't need to be perfect in a fanfic, if that's what your worried about. Ofcourse it can't hurt either.


Yeah. I know some fanfics that aren't perfect english, but I still love them for the story.

Shazz, just write about Tali<3Shep and you'll get millions of fans... :wub:


I did have a fanfic up but, I accidently deleted it. I guess I'll give it another go at it. someday.


Ohh, look here's what you gotta do: write it in some text program like microsoft word or something, (or you can just use notepad if you like xD) so you can always save it and write in when you want. Then, once it's finished, just copy paste it on the net.

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Firewalker DLC coming tomorrow \\o/.

BTW, Valttu suomest ?

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