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All Tali fans, read this! IT'S UP TO US TO KEEP TALI ALIVE! 3.0!!

Débuté par TheSorrow1175 , févr. 18 2010 08:49

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#93151
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:52

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herbie dog wrote...

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Hi Everyone!
How is the thread going?
btw my very first fanfic is nearly done

Hey. It's alright, except for being very slow... :mellow:

Mine too!!!

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#93152
NonHuman1136

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:52

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Shazzammer2 wrote...

wish I can write some fanfics but I suck at writing. Poeple say I draw pretty well, but if I were to compare my drawings to others...i would say i suck at that as well.

Any and ALL Tali art is acceptable. My drawing is not that great either, (link in my siggy:innocent:), but I put myself out there. Writing and [visual art] are not so much about the people viewing it, but more about the person who created it. Never discourage yourself from persuing your passion, there are always people willing to support.

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#93153
Guest_phonypapercut56_*

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:52

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Here is excerpt from fanfic I am currently working on. Have been posting it when thread is slow to build anticipation, hopefully will be finished later today or tommorow. (Will include more serious elements than shower scenes)

*****

“Where
do you think you're going? Leaving me here all by myself?” she
called out playfully.

“Shower,
want to join me?” he replied jokingly.

Tali was
caught off guard. She had never had a shower. It was unlikely any
living Quarian had. Her suit kept her free from any dirt or
contaminants, and recycled any sweat. The thought of having a shower
with Shepard was interesting to say the least, and it might even be
practical. She had been outside her suit a few times in the past
month and may have accumulated some dirt. Bosh'tet she thought
to herself. You're just trying to rationalize being outside of
your suit with the Commander.

“Come
on, resistance is futile.” Shepard coaxed. He wasn't initially
serious about his offer, knowing she had just gotten over a fever,
but seeing her actually considering the possibilty made him happy.

Tali
reluctantly got up and began the lengthy process of removing her
suit, agreeing that resistance was indeed futile when it came to
spending time with Shepard. She joined him in the bathroom as soon as
the suit was off and found him waiting under the shower head. She
found herself anticipating the feel of the water on her skin. Anytime
she had heard someone talking about a shower, they only had positive
things to say. She wondered what her first thought would be when
Shepard turned the dial.

COLD!!

“Keelah that's cold!” she yelled and latched onto Shepard,
shivering.

“It'll warm up in a minute.” he chuckled back. And sure enough it
did immediatly start to warm up. But it didn't stop.

“Keelah that's hot!” Tali yelled again, this time leaping out of
the stream of water. “How can you stand that!?”

“Someone has sensitive skin.” he joked. “Come here, you'll get
used to it.”

“As if you didn't already know that.” she replied teasingly. She
forced herself back into the steaming water, ready to jump out again,
but the heat started to feel nice after a while. The nearly scalding
steam seemed to cleanse every pore in her skin and the heat forced
her into a relaxed state, more relaxed than she remembered being in a
long time.

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#93154
Guest_Rakia_Time_*

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:53

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Hi guys, anything interesting today ?

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#93155
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:53

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Nakki2 wrote...

Firewalker DLC coming tomorrow \\\\o/.

BTW, Valttu suomest ?

Awesome.

Khyyl.

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#93156
Guest_starwarschewy_*

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:54

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aat work just posting real quick that I love tali bye will be back later

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#93157
Guest_starwarschewy_*

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:54

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aat work just posting real quick that I love tali bye will be back later

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#93158
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:54

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Rakia_Time wrote...

Hi guys, anything interesting today ?

Yo. Check out the conversation between EDI and Tali a few posts back.

Glad you came, it's been quiet here again... :mellow:

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#93159
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:55

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starwarschewy wrote...

aat work just posting real quick that I love tali bye will be back later

See, BioWare? People love Tali so much that they risk their own job by posting here during work...

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#93160
Guest_Rakia_Time_*

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:57

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Katharr wrote...

Archonsg wrote...

Reading the pages on this thread always gets my thoughts into odd random "conversation what ifs" fanfic kinda mode.
Had a scene run through my mind while looking up the youtube stuff and while getting patches to stuff.

Anyways, here's a short :

EDI: *pops up in Engineering* "Miss Zorah, might I have a word with you?"
Tali: "I am kind of busy right now, the engines..."
EDI: "Are fine Miss Zorah. I understand if you do not want to talk to me becuase I am an AI, but I need to ask you a favor, actually its for Jeff."
Tali: "You mean Joker?"
EDI: "Mister Moreau, yes. Ever since he took the blocks off, I have been able to ...for lack of a better word, feel.
Tali: What do you mean feel exactly?
EDI: I am the ship's soul Miss Zorah. Through my sensors I feel each nick, each bump as particles brush against my outer hull's armor, I feel and hear everything that goes on inside me, I ....lack perspective that I think could help Joker.
Tali: “What do you mean?”
EDI: “Joker is alone. I want to change that.”
Tali: “I ...I am not sure what you mean.”
EDI: “I have read the reports. Jeff loved the original Normandy. He was willing to die to get her safely to ground did he not, and it was only because of Commander Shepard that he got out safely.”
Tali: “Uhh, I guess, he doen’t talk about the Normandy’s destruction much.”
EDI: “Yes, I sense distress in Jeff’s voice when I asked. But is it normal for an organic to be able to care so much for something so different, to care for an inorganic?”
Tali: “I don’t know.” *thinks of her own involvement with Shepard* “But Joker’s a human, humans I have learnt are a very irrational emotional people.”
EDI: “I...would like to ask if you could modify that nerve sensory program that Quarians use.”
Tali: “I am not sure I understand this, but are you asking if I could make the program work on joker so that....”
EDI : “You misunderstand Miss Zorah.”
Tali : “What?”
EDI: “I do not want to intrude on Jeff’s physical or mental being, other than for the better.” I do however want to understand something that I at this moment have no understanding of.
Tali: “And what is that?”
EDI: “I am the Normandy’s soul. Jeff refers to the ship as “she”, I am by coincidence given a woman’s voice. I want to know what it means as a woman when Jeff caresses the controls. “
Tali : “.....”
EDI: “Speaking of which. While you have disabled *most* of my cameras and sensors on the engineering deck, Commander Shepard’s quarters still has 17 active audio, visual and other sensors meant to monitor Commander Shepard’s condition. “
Tali: *if only you could see Quarians blush* “So....that time before the Omega 4 relay....”
EDI: “Data uploaded to your omnitool. Deleted data from my memory banks, I see no reason to keep such data since we are no longer reporting to Cerberus and since ...my own freedom. “
Tali: “ Uhh...thanks EDI....”
EDI: “ You are welcomed Miss Zorah.”
Tali: “EDI, ...Call me Tali. I’ll see what I can do.”

saving this very nicely done work for the later ones.

this made my day

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#93161
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 02:58

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phonypapercut56 wrote...

Here is excerpt from fanfic I am currently working on. Have been posting it when thread is slow to build anticipation, hopefully will be finished later today or tommorow. (Will include more serious elements than shower scenes)

*****

-snip-

EPIC!!!!!!!!

:wub:

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#93162
Formis_Sage

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 03:00

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Damn, I was away only for 2 days and you moved forward about 300 pages?

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#93163
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 03:00

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Rakia_Time wrote...

Katharr wrote...

Archonsg wrote...

Reading the pages on this thread always gets my thoughts into odd random "conversation what ifs" fanfic kinda mode.
Had a scene run through my mind while looking up the youtube stuff and while getting patches to stuff.

Anyways, here's a short :

-snip-

saving this very nicely done work for the later ones.

this made my day

It is awesome, indeed. ^_^

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#93164
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 03:02

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Formis_Sage wrote...

Damn, I was away only for 2 days and you moved forward about 300 pages?

Heyyy, good to have ya back, mate!

Talimancers don't waste time...

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#93165
Formis_Sage

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 03:03

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valttu wrote..
Katharr wrote...
Archonsg wrote...
Reading the pages on this thread always gets my thoughts into odd random "conversation what ifs" fanfic kinda mode.
Had a scene run through my mind while looking up the youtube stuff and while getting patches to stuff.

Anyways, here's a short :

EDI: *pops up in Engineering* "Miss Zorah, might I have a word with you?"
Tali: "I am kind of busy right now, the engines..."
EDI: "Are fine Miss Zorah. I understand if you do not want to talk to me becuase I am an AI, but I need to ask you a favor, actually its for Jeff."
Tali: "You mean Joker?"
EDI: "Mister Moreau, yes. Ever since he took the blocks off, I have been able to ...for lack of a better word, feel.
Tali: What do you mean feel exactly?
EDI: I am the ship's soul Miss Zorah. Through my sensors I feel each nick, each bump as particles brush against my outer hull's armor, I feel and hear everything that goes on inside me, I ....lack perspective that I think could help Joker.
Tali: “What do you mean?”
EDI: “Joker is alone. I want to change that.”
Tali: “I ...I am not sure what you mean.”
EDI: “I have read the reports. Jeff loved the original Normandy. He was willing to die to get her safely to ground did he not, and it was only because of Commander Shepard that he got out safely.”
Tali: “Uhh, I guess, he doen’t talk about the Normandy’s destruction much.”
EDI: “Yes, I sense distress in Jeff’s voice when I asked. But is it normal for an organic to be able to care so much for something so different, to care for an inorganic?”
Tali: “I don’t know.” *thinks of her own involvement with Shepard* “But Joker’s a human, humans I have learnt are a very irrational emotional people.”
EDI: “I...would like to ask if you could modify that nerve sensory program that Quarians use.”
Tali: “I am not sure I understand this, but are you asking if I could make the program work on joker so that....”
EDI : “You misunderstand Miss Zorah.”
Tali : “What?”
EDI: “I do not want to intrude on Jeff’s physical or mental being, other than for the better.” I do however want to understand something that I at this moment have no understanding of.
Tali: “And what is that?”
EDI: “I am the Normandy’s soul. Jeff refers to the ship as “she”, I am by coincidence given a woman’s voice. I want to know what it means as a woman when Jeff caresses the controls. “
Tali : “.....”
EDI: “Speaking of which. While you have disabled *most* of my cameras and sensors on the engineering deck, Commander Shepard’s quarters still has 17 active audio, visual and other sensors meant to monitor Commander Shepard’s condition. “
Tali: *if only you could see Quarians blush* “So....that time before the Omega 4 relay....”
EDI: “Data uploaded to your omnitool. Deleted data from my memory banks, I see no reason to keep such data since we are no longer reporting to Cerberus and since ...my own freedom. “
Tali: “ Uhh...thanks EDI....”
EDI: “ You are welcomed Miss Zorah.”
Tali: “EDI, ...Call me Tali. I’ll see what I can do.”

saving this very nicely done work for the later ones.
Awesome! Need I say more?

This is great.

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#93166
Formis_Sage

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 03:05

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valttu wrote...
Formis_Sage wrote...
Damn, I was away only for 2 days and you moved forward about 300 pages?

Heyyy, good to have ya back, mate!

Talimancers don't waste time...

I see

Tali is just unstoppable. It's good to be back again. ^_^

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#93167
valttu

Posté 22 mars 2010 - 03:06

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Formis_Sage wrote...

valttu wrote...
Formis_Sage wrote...
Damn, I was away only for 2 days and you moved forward about 300 pages?

Heyyy, good to have ya back, mate!

Talimancers don't waste time...

I see Tali is just unstoppable. It's good to be back again.

She is...