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[epoch_]

It would absolutely make ME3 if there was a news story on the citadel about a recent boom of interest in Tali on the extranet.

[MattDratt]

runescapeguy9 wrote...

Nice 

[Scalpels]

[UFOash]

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[herbie dog]

so what should i do?

should i stop writing or carry on?

[Alphyn]

Another short story.

Shepard
Tali
Mordin

-Dr Solus' tech lab-

*whispering* Okay, it's in here.
Are you sure?
Were else would it be?
Okay, but we'd better hurry. What does this thing look like?
It's a long, smooth tube with-
*holding back laughter*
Shepard! *holds laughter* You're going to wake him up you bosh'tet!
Okay, okay. With..?
... no.
What?
I'm not going to say it.
Tali, we haven't got much time! What's inside it?
... white liquid.
Oh... *snickers*
Shepard! Shh!
*muffles* Less... alcohol...
Okay. Quick.
*looks through Mordin's things*
Well?
It's not here!
What?!
And... mood... musi-i-c...
It's not here! Keelah, what are we going to do?!
It's alright, Tali!
Keelah, and I bought new music too!
We'll find it, Tali!
Wait... there it is! *grabs tube*
It doesn't look like there's enough.
There's enough.
Tali, be honest with yourself. It's not even quarter full!
But Shepard-
... with... cells-s-s...
We can't risk it, Tali. I can't loose you.
You're right. Sorry, Shepard.
What for?
For dragging you out of bed for my own selfish needs.
You've got nothing to be sorry about, Tali. I enjoyed this.
Really?
Yeah! Now, c'mon, let's get some sleep.
*shouts* Shepard! WAIT!
*trips* Ow! F*ck!
*BANG*
Huh?! Ah! Intruders?! No, Normandy drifting. Alarms still active. Stealth systems engadged.
Mordin...
Have to ask, is that a crew member? No, not likely, everyone asleep. EDI ensures that everyone is resting at 11:00pm. Maybe just a dream? No, can feel bed-sheets. Hear myself talking...
Mordin! It's Tali and Shepard! We came to your lab to get me some antibiotics so that we can...
Tali and Shepard? You tried not to wake me? Appreciate it, but look at the mess you've made! Will take days -no, months- to reorganize! 
We're sorry, Mordin.
We won't do this again.
Unlikely. In early stages of relationship. Excitement overpowering. Seeking thrills together.
We promise.
*whispers* What?
Hrm. Good. Is there anything you were looking for?
Like I said; antibiotics.
Ah! Of course! *hands Tali antibiotics* Here.
Thank you, Mordin. We'll clean this up in the morning.
*whispers* What?!
Doesn't matter. Can do it myself.
Well, okay. Let us know if you need us for anything...
Actually, Tali. Now that you mention it, I could need help cleaning out the expermentation chambers. Dead Collector. Unpleasant smell, as you noticed. 
Uh... sure. We'll help with that, right Shepard?
You've gotta be kid-
*nudges Shepard*
Ow! It'll be my pleasure, Mordin.
Excellent! Enjoy yourselves! Good night!
'Night, Mordin.
Yeah, night.
See? That wasn't so bad, right?
*mumbles*

End.

Modifié par Alphyn, 27 mars 2010 - 01:04 .

[Gust4v]

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edit: fixed

Modifié par Gust4v, 27 mars 2010 - 12:54 .

[epoch_]

herbie dog wrote...

so what should i do?
should i stop writing or carry on?

Keep going. It was a bit too dark for me, but it was still very good.

[epoch_]

Alphyn wrote...

Another short story.

Shepard
Tali
Mordin

-Dr Solus' tech lab-

*whispering* Okay, it's in here.
Are you sure?
Were else would it be?
Okay, but we'd better hurry. What does this thing look like?
It's a long, smooth tube with-
*holding back laughter*
Shepard! *holds laughter* You're going to wake him up you bosh'tet!
Okay, okay. With..?
... no.
What?
I'm not going to say it.
Tali, we haven't got much time! What's inside it?
... white liquid.
Oh... *snickers*
Shepard! Shh!
*muffles* Less... alcohol...
Okay. Quick.
*looks through Mordin's things*
Well?
It's not here!
What?!
And... mood... musi-i-c...
It's not here! Keelah, what are we going to do?!
It's alright, Tali!
Keelah, and I bought new music too!
We'll find it, Tali!
Wait... there it is! *grabs tube*
It doesn't look like there's enough.
There's enough.
Tali, be honest with yourself. It's not even quarter full!
But Shepard-
... with... cells-s-s...
We can't risk it, Tali. I can't loose you.
You're right. Sorry, Shepard.
What for?
For dragging you out of bed for my own selfish needs.
You've got nothing to be sorry about, Tali. I enjoyed this.
Really?
Yeah! Now, c'mon, let's get some sleep.
*shouts* Shepard! WAIT!
*trips* Ow! F*ck!
*BANG*
Huh?! Ah! Intruders?! No, Normandy drifting. Alarms still active. Stealh systems engadged.
Mordin...
Have to ask, is that a crew member? No, not likely, everyone asleep. EDI ensures that everyone is resting at 11:00pm. Maybe just a dream? No, can feel bed-sheets. Hear myself talking...
Mordin! It's Tali and Shepard! We came to your lab to get me some antibiotics so that we can...
Tali and Shepard? You tried not to wake me? Apperciate it, but look at the mess you've made! Will take days -no, months- to reorganize! 
We're sorry, Mordin.
We won't do this again.
Unlikely. In early stages of relationship. Excitement overpowering. Seeking thrills together.
We promise.
*whispers* What?
Hrm. Good. Is there anything you were looking for?
Like I said; antibiotics.
Ah! Of course! *hands Tali antibiotics* Here.
Thank you, Mordin. We'll clean this up in the morning.
*whispers* What?!
Doesn't matter. Can do it myself.
Well, okay. Let us know if you need us for anything...
Actually, Tali. Now that you mention it, I could need help cleaning out the expermentation chambers. Dead Collector. Unpleasant smell, as you noticed. 
Uh... sure. We'll help with that, right Shepard?
You've gotta be kid-
*nudges Shepard*
Ow! It'll be my pleasure, Mordin.
Excellent! Enjoy yourselves! Good night!
'Night, Mordin.
Yeah, night.
See? That wasn't so bad, right?
*mumbles*

End.

I like long stories, but this story matches my current attention span perfectly. well done.

[UFOash]

Alphyn wrote...

Another short story.

Shepard
Tali
Mordin

-Dr Solus' tech lab-

*whispering* Okay, it's in here.
Are you sure?
Were else would it be?
Okay, but we'd better hurry. What does this thing look like?
It's a long, smooth tube with-
*holding back laughter*
Shepard! *holds laughter* You're going to wake him up you bosh'tet!
Okay, okay. With..?
... no.
What?
I'm not going to say it.
Tali, we haven't got much time! What's inside it?
... white liquid.
Oh... *snickers*
Shepard! Shh!
*muffles* Less... alcohol...
Okay. Quick.
*looks through Mordin's things*
Well?
It's not here!
What?!
And... mood... musi-i-c...
It's not here! Keelah, what are we going to do?!
It's alright, Tali!
Keelah, and I bought new music too!
We'll find it, Tali!
Wait... there it is! *grabs tube*
It doesn't look like there's enough.
There's enough.
Tali, be honest with yourself. It's not even quarter full!
But Shepard-
... with... cells-s-s...
We can't risk it, Tali. I can't loose you.
You're right. Sorry, Shepard.
What for?
For dragging you out of bed for my own selfish needs.
You've got nothing to be sorry about, Tali. I enjoyed this.
Really?
Yeah! Now, c'mon, let's get some sleep.
*shouts* Shepard! WAIT!
*trips* Ow! F*ck!
*BANG*
Huh?! Ah! Intruders?! No, Normandy drifting. Alarms still active. Stealh systems engadged.
Mordin...
Have to ask, is that a crew member? No, not likely, everyone asleep. EDI ensures that everyone is resting at 11:00pm. Maybe just a dream? No, can feel bed-sheets. Hear myself talking...
Mordin! It's Tali and Shepard! We came to your lab to get me some antibiotics so that we can...
Tali and Shepard? You tried not to wake me? Apperciate it, but look at the mess you've made! Will take days -no, months- to reorganize! 
We're sorry, Mordin.
We won't do this again.
Unlikely. In early stages of relationship. Excitement overpowering. Seeking thrills together.
We promise.
*whispers* What?
Hrm. Good. Is there anything you were looking for?
Like I said; antibiotics.
Ah! Of course! *hands Tali antibiotics* Here.
Thank you, Mordin. We'll clean this up in the morning.
*whispers* What?!
Doesn't matter. Can do it myself.
Well, okay. Let us know if you need us for anything...
Actually, Tali. Now that you mention it, I could need help cleaning out the expermentation chambers. Dead Collector. Unpleasant smell, as you noticed. 
Uh... sure. We'll help with that, right Shepard?
You've gotta be kid-
*nudges Shepard*
Ow! It'll be my pleasure, Mordin.
Excellent! Enjoy yourselves! Good night!
'Night, Mordin.
Yeah, night.
See? That wasn't so bad, right?
*mumbles*

End.

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
Kinda confusing the colours go off halfway through.
Still cool though

[Alphyn]

Fixed the colours.

[epoch_]

Your edit makes it much easier to read

[Alphyn]

Fixed the colours some more.

[UFOash]

Going Now.
See ya'll tomorow (hopefully) comrades!
Keelah Sel'ai

[herbie dog]

UFOash wrote...

Going Now.
See ya'll tomorow (hopefully) comrades!
Keelah Sel'ai

Keelah Sel'ai[/

[Alphyn]

Thinking of making another game on ME2. This'll be my 10th time playing through it.

[Scalpels]

[Alphyn]

Fixed typos.