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[PMorgan18]

sergio71785 wrote...



-One week after Collector base attack-

Tali: So, um...my illness from our first time is completely gone...

*Tali grips the bed covers*

Tali: And, uh... I was just wondering if you wanted to, um... you know... 

*Tali slowly rubs her legs together...*

*Shepard Pounce.

[gkillerrin]

FsDxRAGE wrote...



Tali song
posted early this morning, but i know only a few viewed it

here FsD read this, you really should

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BBCode

also if you use firefox, get this to, it will help us all out :happy::innocent:

[gkillerrin]

Modifié par gkillerrin, 04 avril 2010 - 04:26 .

[Grif101]

DrathanGervaise wrote...

All I'm gonna say is Abrams, Leopards, Merkavas, and Challengers don't fight each other.

They're Bros for life dawg. Them Commie tanks ain't got nothing on 'em.

We know, we're just saying hypothetically and just plain old compring them^_^

[Goat_Shepard]

sergio71785 wrote...


-One week after Collector base attack-

Tali: So, um...my illness from our first time is completely gone...

*Tali grips the bed covers*

Tali: And, uh... I was just wondering if you wanted to, um... you know... 

*Tali slowly rubs her legs together...*

Idk why but I swear I heard crickets cherping when I read the last line lol what has Shepard done, look what he's released. He handles the situation with suave, I'll tell ya :innocent:

[FsDxRAGE]

I can’t sleep. Tali turned over in the bed pulling the clean white sheets over her head. Her light breathing was the only noise she could hear and it drove her crazy. Why doesn’t the Normandy make more noise? Her eyes shot open and they were met with a pleasant sight, well sort of. Shepard’s face was laying sideways in his pillow with a slippery sheen running down the corner of his mouth. Smiling, she ran her hand gently through his hair with a gloved hand. He let loose a sharp snore making Tali jump. His mouth closed and he turned over in his bed pulling all the sheets with him. She looked down at her suited body that wasn’t enveloped with the sheets she found so comforting. The fish tank spilled a cozy blue light throughout the room painting the grey metallic walls. Ever since Tali was invited by Shepard to sleep in his bed, she has been falling asleep almost instantly with her fragile body sinking deep into the comfortable mattress. She looked at his back that was facing her observing it rise and fall. Her finger ran down the length of his spine being steered by the two muscles that rose from either side of the middle of his back. He must be dead tired…I can imagine after all the dancing we did hours ago.
Tali swung her legs over the edge of the bed and quietly placed her feet on the floor. I can remember the feeling of the cool floor the hour before entering the Omega 4 relay. The only time I have been out of my suit in years. She spun her head over to Shepard watching him sleep. It seems too good to be true. Tali released a sigh and stood up. Her powerful leg muscles burned as she pushed her body off the bed. I might have over done it on the dancing. She approached the fish tank and stared into the light blue water. Her finger went up to the glass tapping on it while looking at the fish; they scattered like leaves being blown in the wind. Suddenly, she felt two warm arms wrap around her thin waist.
“Can’t sleep,” Shepard quietly asked leaning his chin on her shoulder gazing into the vessel that held the pale blue water. Tali placed her hands on his that were intertwined on her stomach.
“Yeah,” she responded rocking side to side. Shepard inhaled a big breath of air rocking with her. “What is in there,” she asked pointing to a blue bag that had luminescent white text scribed on it reading Askaria. A subtle white light radiated out of the opening of the bag throwing its light off Shepard’s old N7 helmet that quietly rests on his desk. He grumbled and picked Tali up. She let out a surprised squeak as he carried her towards the bathroom. He set her down on the floor gingerly.
“Stay here Tali and close your eyes,” he whispered exiting the bathroom with a grin. She anxiously folded her arms over her lap as she teetered back and forth on her feet. What can this be? She could hear his bare feet approaching the bathroom then the door shut closed.
“Shepard?”
“No looking.”
Her heart picked up its pace as her imagination broke free wondering what was in the bag. His hands plucked hers apart and he set a heavy object in Tali’s cupped hands. She let loose an antsy giggle caressing the tall smooth object in her hands. A grin exploded across her lips not opening her eyes trying to guess what it possibly could be. “Okay, you can open your eyes now.” Tali’s eyelids flickered to life; her pupils dilating growing smaller from the most beautiful light she has ever seen. In her hands was a clear glass vial with sharp angular planes shooting up from the six sided base; each plane a different shape. A lustrous dark purple liquid mixed with an opaque lighter lavender churned together in the small container, the two viscous liquids dancing with each other as the amethyst metallic cap fired gyrating lights into the mysterious elixir. The base had a dodecagonal crystal residing at the foundation reflecting the light off it swabbing the bathroom wall with the entrancing hue.
“It…it is beautiful Shepard,” she breathlessly told him in the dark room staring into the bottle. “What is it,” she asked looking away from the enthralling substance. Shepard grabbed her thin wrist and sprayed it with the liquid propelling a pillow of illuminated mist on her wrist.
“Smell it Tali.”
She took her wrist pressing it against her helmet.
“I…I can’t really smell it,” she said her voice drowning with depression. She felt two hands glide up under her cheeks and press against her helmet, Nervous, she grabbed Shepard’s hands as he took off her face plate.
“Shepard,” she whispered staring into his eyes that shimmered back two purple pin pricks of light. She inhaled the perfume and enjoyed the scent immensely.
“You like it Tali,” he kindly asked. She blushed as she swore he could hear her heart beat.“No…I love it Shepard,” she responded sincerely. “I…I never get gifts like these,” she stammered looking into his face. His hand crept its way up her face lightly swiping a lone tear off her gently swooping features. Her lips pushed against his out of pure compulsion showing him her true feelings. She nipped at his lower lip as his arms came around the back of her knees lifting them around his waist. Shepard set her on the sink retuning the light kisses. He pressed his waist between her legs and rubbed her back. The bottle lay on the ground sparkling in delight enjoying the dark room as the two made love to each other…

From my FF, I need someone to pass out in here

[cannedcream]

Goat_Shepard wrote...
By the title...Idk...you have a dirty mind...not sure if want

Goat, of all the things I refuse to take seriously in this world, my writing is not one of them.

In other words, IT AIN'T PORN!

Now read it. Don't make me smack your penis.

[Jake71887]

Goat_Shepard wrote...

Jake71887 wrote...

Goat_Shepard wrote...

Ormagodenator wrote...
it's just so adorable

Ok this is going to be colored, that much is obvious. I love pencil sketches, though, gives option to color while keeping majestic black and white look. This picture comes to mind.





MOAR!

Do you mean you're going tot ry and color it? I'm confused

It's done been colored. I said I like the pencil drawings cuz you eventually get 2 photos of equal epicness.

Shazz's Tali + Puppy could be colored by....a willing person who...you know..would make it legendary...

I don't think he wants it colored; but you should take a shot at it regardless

[SirEmilCrane]

cannedcream wrote...


[align=center]Gentlemen, behold:
NEW TALI FAN FICTION!
Read it or you'll die!!!. . .eventually. At some point. Probably for unrelated reasons. [/align]
[align=center]Sensations[/align]

Great work, but can't you write something uplifting for a change?

[chool77]

hows it going every one?!

[LonsomeAlex417]

Well, I'm signing off, night everybody



Keelah Se'lai

[SirEmilCrane]

Grif101 wrote...

DrathanGervaise wrote...

All I'm gonna say is Abrams, Leopards, Merkavas, and Challengers don't fight each other.

They're Bros for life dawg. Them Commie tanks ain't got nothing on 'em.

We know, we're just saying hypothetically and just plain old compring them^_^

I love tanks, maybe a bit too much
I'm better with WWII ones though
Panther>all

[Lividity Jones]

cannedcream wrote...


[align=center]Gentlemen, behold:
NEW TALI FAN FICTION!
Read it or you'll die!!!. . .eventually. At some point. Probably for unrelated reasons. [/align]
[align=center]Sensations[/align]

That was incredible. Thank whatever cosmic benevolence exists that Shepard actually survived.

[cannedcream]

FsDxRAGE wrote...
*FF SNIP*

From my FF, I need someone to pass out in here

This get's cannedcream's "D'AWWWWWWWW" seal of approval.

[Ormagodenator]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

Grif101 wrote...

DrathanGervaise wrote...

All I'm gonna say is Abrams, Leopards, Merkavas, and Challengers don't fight each other.

They're Bros for life dawg. Them Commie tanks ain't got nothing on 'em.

We know, we're just saying hypothetically and just plain old compring them^_^

I love tanks, maybe a bit too much
I'm better with WWII ones though
Panther>all

TANK!!!

(sorry just had to do that)

[gkillerrin]

cannedcream wrote...

FsDxRAGE wrote...
*FF SNIP*

From my FF, I need someone to pass out in here

This get's cannedcream's "D'AWWWWWWWW" seal of approval.

It also has Gkillerrins Seal of Awesomeness, and the Council Seal of Tali

[SirEmilCrane]

Ormagodenator wrote...
*tank snip*

sigh

[cannedcream]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

Great work, but can't you write something uplifting for a change?

Why whatever did you not find uplifting about that?

Come on, it wasn't. . .as bad.

[Goat_Shepard]

FsDxRAGE wrote...

I can’t sleep.

From my FF, I need someone to pass out in here

That was either a severe suppression of man-tears or a heart attack. Either way it was with joy Very descriptive, it felt very real (except ya usually don't think of giving someone a gift right after waking up in the middle of the night) but this is a legendary win. This may actually convince me that FF is not all evil like some people say I only read the shortfics on here but grr when I have time, I think I'll enjoy this more than I'd imagined.
I need the stats on all this Tali FF. How FFs total, how many pages of text...hmmm :innocent:

Modifié par Goat_Shepard, 04 avril 2010 - 04:38 .

[SirEmilCrane]

cannedcream wrote...

SirEmilCrane wrote...

Great work, but can't you write something uplifting for a change?

Why whatever did you not find uplifting about that?

Come on, it wasn't. . .as bad.

No it was great, just made me really sad, esp the ending

[FsDxRAGE]

SirEmilCrane



5.6E87 respect points to you for liking the Panther

*looks at model of one two feet to the right*

i have a crush on that tank

[Grif101]

SirEmilCrane wrote...

Grif101 wrote...

DrathanGervaise wrote...

All I'm gonna say is Abrams, Leopards, Merkavas, and Challengers don't fight each other.

They're Bros for life dawg. Them Commie tanks ain't got nothing on 'em.

We know, we're just saying hypothetically and just plain old compring them^_^

I love tanks, maybe a bit too much
I'm better with WWII ones though
Panther>all

I pretty much love everything about the military.......though I'm completely the opposite regarding WWII Tanks.......I do better with mid to late Cold War and modern tanks:D

[gkillerrin]

http://s39.photobuck...in/Mass Effect/

[gkillerrin]

Why does it always double up my posts ?

Modifié par gkillerrin, 04 avril 2010 - 04:40 .