cannedcream wrote...
Commandr Bond wrote...
cannedcream wrote...
That's very kind of you to say. I did my best, but it's not like the scene has been trademarked. . .yet. Excuse me, I need to go to the patent office for. . .things.
Anyway, if I remember right that story took me about 35 or 45 minutes to write and proof-read. That story had a really good 'flow', all I had to do was sit back and let the words take me where they wanted to go.
Which turned out to be a very depressing place, it seems.
Poor Tali. 
My bad. I added that 'its hard to follow up' and a smiley face to the post because I thought I came across as a jackass, and if I did, it was merely an objective statement.
Anyway, tragedy is strangely addicting. Luckily, there's ME2/3, where Tali is alive! 
Oh! I didn't think you were being an ass at all! Sorry if I came across sounding like I thought you were.
Here's a smilie face to show you everything is cool:
(he's a wizard)
@1490, the link to the fanfic is right there in my sig. I hope you like it.
Had to have a few people point that out for me to notice it, lol. I guess I'm so used to seeing Tali signatures that I don't look below the comments anymore.
Actually, I
also have read your story before: probably about 7-10 days ago back on thread 2.0 when someone suggested it. It's labeled as "unknown" on the 1st page of the thread, so I didn't know before that you wrote it.
I thought it was an awesome story though, totally broke my heart. I read this on the same day I had completed the game with my first Shepard, and Tali died trying to shut the door at the Collector base. I felt pretty bad when that happened, but I felt REALLY bad after reading your story. I mean, not that it's a bad thing, because it means you did a great job with your descriptions and emotions, but damn was it sad.
Seriously though, you're a great writer. Keep up the good work!