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[Aricle]

I took this picture while playing Mass Effect last night. Yes, Garrus has a sniper rifle light saber.

[kglaser]

Garrus is just that cool. How many people could handle a weapon such as that? LOL

[Twilight_Princess]

Edit: Jacob favouritism yet again...He gets 4 death lines. Jack and Thane get 3 (still going down the list)...But both of their romanced lines are  Although Thane's voice sounds different through headphones. Less like he's been gargling cement and more like he was speaking through a synth. I guess it's somewhat similar to a turian's actually...

What the heck is it with the  Jacob favouritism???! GAAAAH. Every time I find out he gets extra dialouge and scenes I always think "That could COULD have been an extra line for garrus....b*stard"   sorry, I can't help but feel bitter , its not fair!! Garrus should have got the same amount of conversations as every one else and he should have had more options for approaching him (like jacob) and he SHOULD have had a post mission romance chat like tali and jacob and and *foams at mouth with anger*.

[Nevara]

One he's human... I don't go for humans and i stayed single and happy in my ME1 playthroughs.
not to say I don't like humans... as friends.
Secondly, I personally can't stand how making Garrus a LI as fan service. It's not exactly FS when our once chatty turian has at most 7 lines of conversation.    They should have made him like he was in ME.  at least I found him extremely fun to talk to.

Modifié par Nevara, 01 juin 2010 - 02:27 .

[Aricle]

@ Nevara: I just finished Chapter 8 of 'Past the Point of no Return'. I don't know what to say and that is meant in a good way but I will try.

-I like the mix of actual dialogue and Garrus' internal thoughts along with Shepard's additional comments. Your descriptions of the fights/missions got the basic idea across without getting bogged down.
-You included some of Garrus' feelings for her after her death and subsequent resurrection and it was just right. Some stories get heavy-handed with that theme, which comes off as downplaying their camaraderie as teammates to me.
-The chapter on Horizon where you say 'he could care less about a damn game'- beautiful in the context of that moment and the fact that Mass Effect's universe is much more than a game.

Thank you for the story, it made me smile and cry in a good way. (And the ME1 theme song came up in shuffle as I wrote this post. ('I need you to recover 'cause I can't make it on my own').

Edit: weird that you posted while I was writing this.

Modifié par Aricle, 01 juin 2010 - 02:29 .

[Nevara]

Aricle wrote...

@ Nevara: I just finished Chapter 8 of 'Past the Point of no Return'. I don't know what to say and that is meant in a good way but I will try.

-I like the mix of actual dialogue and Garrus' internal thoughts along with Shepard's additional comments. Your descriptions of the fights/missions got the basic idea across without getting bogged down.
-You included some of Garrus' feelings for her after her death and subsequent resurrection and it was just right. Some stories get heavy-handed with that theme, which comes off as downplaying their camaraderie as teammates to me.
-The chapter on Horizon where you say 'he could care less about a damn game'- beautiful in the context of that moment and the fact that Mass Effect's universe is much more than a game.

Thank you for the story, it made me smile and cry in a good way. (And the ME1 theme song came up in shuffle as I wrote this post. ('I need you to recover 'cause I can't make it on my own').

Edit: weird that you posted while I was writing this.

Thanks.  I'm suprised so many people liked it.  I just got a second one out this morning.  It was bogging down my chapter 9 thoughts.  It's a little darker, and edgier but so far, I've gotten some good results from it.

during the flashback to after Saren in chapter 2 I was listening to that song.  It seemed fitting at the time. 

[Aricle]

Nevara wrote...during the flashback to after Saren in chapter 2 I was listening to that song.  It seemed fitting at the time. 

Yes, very. <3

[Andaius20]

hey garrusites how's the thread going?

[Nevara]

i still think its funny though, and maybe its just me, but if someone can answer please do... if I've had a hundred views of one story, and one review, what does that mean? Not to be cynical (at least try not to be) but isn't it counterintuitive to the writing process to say nothing. Even if they like it say something. It motivates people (such as myself) to get props.... meh nm...

[Nevara]

Andaius20 wrote...

hey garrusites how's the thread going?

nice and steady... warm and fuzzy... like always. 

[smecky-kitteh]

Aricle wrote...

I took this picture while playing Mass Effect last night. Yes, Garrus has a sniper rifle light saber.

my word... is that phenix armor?!

[Sialater]

Nevara wrote...

i still think its funny though, and maybe its just me, but if someone can answer please do... if I've had a hundred views of one story, and one review, what does that mean? Not to be cynical (at least try not to be) but isn't it counterintuitive to the writing process to say nothing. Even if they like it say something. It motivates people (such as myself) to get props.... meh nm...

Don't feel too bad.  (I think I gave you a review, if not, shame on me and I'll do it shortly.)  People are shy.  I actually find it more heartening to see how many favorited the story, put me on their author alert list, or marked me as a favorite author.  The reviews aren't generally helpful since no one ever says anything truly constructive in them.  But if they like you enough to keep coming back... that's the real test.


Oh!  And Garrus.

Modifié par Sialater, 01 juin 2010 - 02:42 .

[Aricle]

Nevara wrote...

i still think its funny though, and maybe its just me, but if someone can answer please do... if I've had a hundred views of one story, and one review, what does that mean? Not to be cynical (at least try not to be) but isn't it counterintuitive to the writing process to say nothing. Even if they like it say something. It motivates people (such as myself) to get props.... meh nm...

I've hesitated to post the five stories I've written for concern over something similar happening. I know it happens because of comments writers make on fanfic about being favourited without any reviews made in proportion to the number of favourites made.

[Nevara]

Sialater wrote...

Nevara wrote...

i still think its funny though, and maybe its just me, but if someone can answer please do... if I've had a hundred views of one story, and one review, what does that mean? Not to be cynical (at least try not to be) but isn't it counterintuitive to the writing process to say nothing. Even if they like it say something. It motivates people (such as myself) to get props.... meh nm...

Don't feel too bad.  (I think I gave you a review, if not, shame on me and I'll do it shortly.)  People are shy.  I actually find it more heartening to see how many favorited the story, put me on their author alert list, or marked me as a favorite author.  The reviews aren't generally helpful since no one ever says anything truly constructive in them.  But if they like you enough to keep coming back... that's the real test.


Oh!  And Garrus.

I think you did comment to the first one I wrote.  It's also been c2'd, what drives me to mental exhaustion how many  hits that you get.  I mean are some of these people actually reading what I've got more than once?

Correction: you did review it.  and I like the word deviant  because deviance is bliss!

Editted: for posterity 

Modifié par Nevara, 01 juin 2010 - 02:50 .

[kglaser]

Nevara wrote...

Aricle wrote...

@ Nevara: I just finished Chapter 8 of 'Past the Point of no Return'.

Thanks.  I'm suprised so many people liked it.  I just got a second one out this morning.  It was bogging down my chapter 9 thoughts.  It's a little darker, and edgier but so far, I've gotten some good results from it.

I'm all caught up, too.  I'm enjoying it too and I'm curious to see where it'll go.  I like how you interjected Garrus's indignation on Horizon--how I'd like to see Garrus get good and upset at Kaidan on Horizon in-game!--and you've been good at keeping everyone in-character, which is generally very important to me with fan fiction.  On to your next story!

eta:  and as for the number of views, I know that sometimes I have to read stories in chunks, as I get time.  It's not uncommon for me to have to sign on to a story a handful of times before I can even finish it, even if it's relatively short, because I have 2 kids and real life does get in the way, such that I can only do things in little chunks sometimes.
And also, some of my favorite stories, I've read over 10+ times.  So it does happen.

Modifié par kglaser, 01 juin 2010 - 02:52 .

[Nevara]

kglaser wrote...

Nevara wrote...

Aricle wrote...

@ Nevara: I just finished Chapter 8 of 'Past the Point of no Return'.

Thanks.  I'm suprised so many people liked it.  I just got a second one out this morning.  It was bogging down my chapter 9 thoughts.  It's a little darker, and edgier but so far, I've gotten some good results from it.

I'm all caught up, too.  I'm enjoying it too and I'm curious to see where it'll go.  I like how you interjected Garrus's indignation on Horizon--how I'd like to see Garrus get good and upset at Kaidan on Horizon in-game!--and you've been good at keeping everyone in-character, which is generally very important to me with fan fiction.  On to your next story!

thank you kindly kg.  So far, everyone here seems to love them  *does happy dance* 

[Aricle]

smecky-kitteh wrote...

Aricle wrote...

I took this picture while playing Mass Effect last night. Yes, Garrus has a sniper rifle light saber.

my word... is that phenix armor?!

Phoenix II, yes. It is so pink! I like the way he looks in the helmet and the pink colour; he still is a bad*ss in pink.

[Andaius20]

Found in the Tali thread but applies equally well for you ladies with Garrus:

[Alexine]

Garrus/Harbinger???



So Harbinger likes primitiveness? Hmm..

[Nevara]

That's adorable!

[kglaser]

OMG, Harbinger actually looks...adorable.



And Garrus can get away with wearing absolutely anything.

[Aricle]

Wow, I never thought I'd feel warm fuzzies for Harbinger. That picture is so cute! I'd like that on a tee shirt or one of those pajama-tee-shirts.

[Bugsie]

Hey Nevara do you have a link to your fanfic?

[Nevara]

Buggirl70 wrote...

Hey Nevara do you have a link to your fanfic?

Sure!  Enjoy!
Here's the first
and the latest one


I'd make it pretty, but my computer is being dumb 

Editted in attempt to look cool...

Modifié par Nevara, 01 juin 2010 - 03:47 .

[Andaius20]

It was part of a series of Valentines day cards some one did.



Some more of there work I think, but am not 100% sure on.