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Sisimka wrote...

:( Poor Alistair!

(At the beginning I have to admit I forgot you'd named his daughter Wynne and when you said dimples and his lap I was o.O and then I remembered. Hehe)

Nice Interlude!


Hee hee. That would be a very different story, indeed!

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I have to admit I've been reading way too much of the naughty meme. Must stop.

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Or you could go run through RtO. Grown-up Wynne is *quite* the naughty one there.

:devil:

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I did NOT enjoy the banter between Alistair and Wynne in RtO.  I found it distracting and disturbing. Image IPB

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Well, I promise - no crazy banter between Alistair and Circle mages in this story! At least, no banter like that!

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Bloodtallow you could put anything in this story and I'd keep reading it. It's great!

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Ha! A non-happy ending for The Warden and Alistair, after the events of Origins. I like the difference.

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I love the idea of Alistair with his daughter - you're doing a great job of painting that out for us!! Soooo sweet. Ready for more!

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Chapter Five - Five Years Later

"Congratulations on your promotion, Warden Commander Simon. And my sincere apologies for it being  so long overdue."

Alistair had sprung the promotion on his former Lieutenant as part of a routine tour of Amaranthine. Prevailing upon the Orlesian man's enthusiasm for a formal affair, he had then convinced Simon to come to Denerim for the official ceremony, and now, as the Commander bowed his head before him, and then turned to wave at the crowd of Wardens, crown foot soldiers, and interested onlookers, Alistair was happy to join in the clapping and cheering that filled the air around them. The Warden ranks were not as full as they had been five years ago, but at least Simon had had success with several recent recruits, who were now whooping and cat-calling from the front row of the surrounding crowd.

"And now, we drink!" Oghren shouted from a crowd of foot soldiers standing near the tables of food and ale on the garrison training field. And as though the dwarf's words were a command from the Maker himself, the crowd shifted, splitting into smaller groups of revelers, or gathering on the other side of the field for music and dancing.

Alistair grasped Simon's hand firmly before pulling the other man into a firm hug.

"Thank you, Commander, for your exemplary service to Ferelden, and for being a sodding good  friend."

"You are most welcome, Your Majesty," Simon grinned back, "it has been my utmost pleasure."

"Here, drink up," Oghren said, thrusting a foaming tankard of ale into Alistair's hands, as Simon made his way through the crowds to get a glass of wine.

For once, the assembled party were here to celebrate someone other than the king of Ferelden, and Alistair used his comparative anonymity to walk along the outskirts of the party, Oghren at his side. Above them, the sun was fading, painting the towering summer clouds in brilliant shades of gold and crimson.

"So you finally let the boot drop," the dwarf said, nodding. "He'll be a good Commander."

"Didn't you once call Simon an Orlesian peacock?" Alistair asked, raising an eyebrow at Oghren over his tankard.

Together, king and general looked at the growing crowd of well-wishers gathered around the new Commander. Simon was in his element, laughing and bowing to all, with a proud glint in his grey eyes.

"Once? Sod it, I call him a peacock every time I see him. He's the vainest, most puffed-up blighter I've ever met. But he knows how to fight, and how to keep his men in line. And he knows how to look death in the eye and not go running in the other direction."

The dwarf drank deeply from his tankard, until foam coated his beard and ale ran in rivulets down his chin. Alistair clapped his friend on the back with a laugh. Some things about Oghren never changed.

He made his way over to Simon to wish the Warden Commander a good evening.

"You are going so soon, Your Majesty? But I was hoping to discuss our plans for the new patrols along the Bannorn." Simon smiled, and Alistair grinned back, knowing the Orlesian Warden's protests for what they were -  a friendly jibe from a man who had already made arrangements to stay up half the night with more than half of the women crowded around him.

"I look foward to discussing it with you, my friend. But not tonight. There's a very lovely young lady who has been awaiting my arrival back at the palace for far longer than I believe she has wished."

"Of course," Simon smiled warmly, "please give the princess my regards."

Alistair gave his Commander a last salute, and left the bustling training field, enjoying the brief walk through the blooming royal gardens to the palace's back doors. He had not even had time to change from his travel clothes before the promotion ceremony began, and now, walking alone down the quiet halls of the palace, he felt a familiar smile of anticipation dance across his face.

"Papa!"

Her excited shrieks met his ears even before the doors had opened. Alistair entered the family quarters and knelt, as a wild blonde whirlwind shot out of the adjoining bedroom and into his arms.

"You were gone so long! Did you bring me anything?" Without waiting for him to answer Wynne squirmed out of his arms and threw herself upon his saddlebag, reaching into the very bottom of the large pouch to extract a beribboned roll of caramel candies.

"My favorite! Can I eat one now, Papa?"

"Of course, my rose, and here's hoping it'll make you stay up all night so you can tell me all about your adventures here at the palace while I was gone." He kissed the fair head gently and began to unpack his things.

"Well, I didn't spend all the time in the palace. Nelys, Isolde and I went on a voyage to Tevinter, and on the way, we ran into pirates!"

"Indeed? I hope you showed them the might of Ferelden."

"Of course! We took them prisoner, and I made their captain walk the plank!"

"And you sailed all the way to Tevinter. That's quite a journey. Did you miss me?"

He smiled, picturing Wynne's imaginary exploits through the palace library, kitchens, and Eamon's study in search of treasure and adventure.

"Oh, I didn't miss you, papa, but Norice did. She whined at the door, and growled in her sleep, unless I let her share my pillow. And she drooled all over the bedclothes!"

He smiled at the mock anger in his daughter's tone. Wynne and Norice had been inseparable since the child had discovered the mabari pup lying cold and abandoned in the stables.

"Did you give her some cheese? You know she behaves better when she has a bedtime snack."

"Yes, but then she mumbles in her sleep, and her breath smells all funny."

Alistair laughed in wonder at his daughter, and resisted the impulse to ruffle her hair, which she hated. Instead, he watched her act out the attacks and parries she had learned in her recent swordplay lessons, and heard her recite a poem she had written about Norice, made all the better by the sleepy dog's sudden appearance and her subsequent theft of Wynne's new caramel candies. Alistair smiled as he watched Wynne chase the mischievous mabari around the family quarters, finally giving up pursuit to curl up exhausted in her father's lap. Tenderly, he smoothed the rumpled curls on her brow.

Don't ever grow up, my dear. Or, if you must, may you always stay as sweet and carefree as you are now.


Gently, he tucked Wynne into her bed, before sinking into a chair nearby. He sat, Norice drooling on his boots, until, smiling, he fell asleep.

Eamon woke him in the early dawn. A runner had come from the Circle Tower, bringing grim news. The darkspawn had found the stone. They were coming.

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Oh nos, darkspawn! We must know what happens next!

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So very, very sweet. I'm eager for more!

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Wynne is just adorable, I love reading about Alistair being a father!

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More is coming soon! Having a bit of trouble with the next chapter, but it should be up tomorrow.

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Aww, you tease. :-P I was hoping there was more now!

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I know, I saw she'd posted and eagerly clicked over! But, good things are worth the wait, right?

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This is just such a lovely, engaging story! What's so great it that you've managed to combine a proper adventure story (which I love) with a lot of bitter-sweet soft-centred themes which I normally shy away from (I'm a bit of a hypocrit on that score mind you) and you do it perfectly.



Alistair sounds spot on and I love it that you've got him with Oghren as a companion — nice foil— and you've managed to get his voice bang on too!



It's a really fab tale, so readable and interesting - I've had some laughs and had lumps in my throat - all in the space of the 30mins I've been reading it! I'm now fully engaged and looking forward to the next bit - thanks bloodtallow!



P.S. and Wynne/Alistair chatter re pirates and the might of Ferelden in your last installment - just so sweet!

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OK, so one day turned into 4. Stupid real life, anyway! So sorry for the delays, everyone! Thank you all so much for reading!
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Chapter Six

The foot soldiers of the crown marched swiftly along the North Road, swords and shields glimmering under the hot summer sun. The Wardens marched with them, and here and there among the armored ranks Alistair could see the distinctive griffon armor of Simon and his recruits. They walked without pause, stopping only to make a brief camp when the moon had fully risen and Alistair's own fatigue finally lanced through the swirling mire of his thoughts, forcing him to rest.

He could not help but be troubled. Worried thoughts and theories echoed in his head, clamoring like the beat of a dozen blacksmith's hammers, until he closed his eyes against headache and questions both. In the five years she had held the stone, First Enchanter Petra had unearthed no new clues about its origin, nor any means of harnessing the latent power that so obviously resided in the stone itself. There seemed to be no way, she had told him after months of questions and tests, to use the stone to do even the most simple of tasks. "It is completely incompatible with a mage's power," Petra had said finally, looking just as disappointed as Alistair had felt. "It might as well be a lump of clay for all the good it does us."

And yet it's drawn them here to the Tower, like a magnet. In the years since the Blight, the darkspawn had never pressed inland as far as Lake Calenhad. Even the attack on Vigil's Keep had, he realized afterwards, been a skirmish, a wild surge which could have been quickly routed, had they had better warning. But, he reminded himself for the hundredth time since the army had begun the march to the Tower, it had been a skirmish to retrieve the stone. Somewhere, somehow, the darkspawn knew something the Wardens did not.

As though he could sense the weight on his friend's mind, Oghren pointedly presided over the crown squadron's cooking, forcing Alistair to down at least a plateful of the dwarf's ale and lamb stew, before supplementing the dish with one of his own potent flasks of homebrew.

"They won't get far. The mages will grind those sodding dusters into the Stone before we even have a chance to get our blades wet."

"Indeed," Simon nodded as he and the senior Wardens joined the king's campfire, "you worry too  much, my friend."

Alistair smiled grimly at his companions, knowing that the expression did not reach his eyes.

"We should get moving before first light," he said softly, gazing into the fire, before finally forcing his eyes to close.

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The sun was setting as the North Road finally merged with the ancient Imperial Highway, and the sharp spire of the Circle Tower pulled into view. The army quickened its pace, bolstered by a following wind which wiped the sweat from their brows and even elicited a few smiles among Simon, Oghren, and the lieutenants of the crown squadron. But then the wind shifted, whirling around them until it met their travel-stained faces, and their smiles faded.

Screams carried on the breezes like the songs of sirens. Explosions, the wordless shouts of the darkspawn, and the clash of metal and stone filled the air. And beneath the tumult, the wind carried something else - the rank stench of the taint, and the piercing, metallic smell of blood.

Alistair grimaced, hearing his own voice give the command to charge like an echo in a dream.

"For Ferelden!"

Swords brandished like the teeth of an angry mabari, the Wardens and crown soldiers surged forward, racing toward the Tower.

As they neared Lake Calenhad, Alistair's breath caught in his throat. For a moment it looked as though the waters of the lake had risen to envelop the houses and buildings of the Tower docks. The hills were black with a seething mass of darkspawn, their ranks rippling in a sick mirror image of the lake beyond the Tower.

The mages were already fighting. Arcs of light and energy surged from the Tower windows, as bolts of fire and ice rained down upon the gathered hordes below. In front of the Tower gates, a line of mages and templars stood fast, the air around them hazy with energy as the mages cast fireballs and lightening against the tide.

The darkspawn recoiled as the crown's army surged toward them, for a moment rushing haphazardly into the crackling spells of the mages, or headlong against the swords of the king's soldiers, before turning to gather before a large structure in the center of the battlefield.

They had brought a catapult with them, a massive spidery black mechanism loaded with stones, pitch and fire. As the army drew closer the darkspawn fired, launching a seething fireball at the Tower. The missile crashed against the stone, cracking the spire and sending a shower of debris into the waters below.

"To the catapult! Cut it down!" Alistair yelled. Toe to toe with Oghren, he waded through the battlefield, knocking the creatures back with his shield, or cutting them down where they stood. The dwarf spun and pivoted beside him, cleaving limbs and beheading those genlocks too slow to duck or parry. Behind them, the crown archers shot volley after volley into the darkspawn ranks, arrows clattering around them like a dark and bloody rain.

But for every genlock he felled, it seemed to Alistair that another ran forward to take its place. Darkspawn roiled around the catapult, driving back the crown soldiers with the sheer mass of their bodies. From behind the ranks of genlocks and hurlocks came the snarling, tainted spells of the darkspawn emissaries, their dark magic warping the ground at their feet, and scorching the very air, until Warden and soldier fell before them, burning and bloody. Next to the emissaries stood a hulking pair of ogres, rapidly preparing the catapult for another shot. The crown's soldiers wouldn't get there in time.

Another missile hurtled through the air to crash against the Tower, and this time, the spire snapped, and the entire pinnacle of the Circle Tower leaned, faltered, and fell.

Maker's blood. There are people up there.

Mages, their brilliant robes clearly visible amidst the smoldering bones of the spire, were falling from the sky, dropping like stones from the Tower. Their screams added to the cacophony of grinding stone and breaking earth, and for one frozen moment, Alistair stood, sword numb in his hand. Then the spire hit the water with a crash of stone and salt spray and the cries of the dying. The Tower was broken.

Anger possessed him.

"Oghren!" Without waiting to see if the dwarf was following him, Alistair ran forward, blindly cutting through the ranks of hurlocks and genlocks to reach the ogres and the catapult they guarded. A pair of emissaries stood before him, tainted magic blossoming from their hands like a diseased flower.  Instinctively, he called forth a blast of energy, stunning the darkspawn and sending them reeling backward, their spells broken. He ran past their bleeding bodies until he reached the first ogre, a scream upon his lips.

The creature turned at his cry, meeting his bellow with a roar of its own. Dodging beneath the ogre's massive arms, he slashed at the creature's neck, closing his eyes against the spatter of blood, before battering his shield against its chest.

The ogre slid backward with the force of his blows, crashing against the catapult with a grunt. Then it braced itself and leapt forward, slashing at Alistair with its great hands.

Maker, but the beast was strong. The massive arms hammered against his shield like a mad gong, until his ears rang. Alistair raised his shield to block another blow, and felt his left arm snap as the ogre smashed its fist against him. Gritting his teeth against the pain, he raised his sword, hacking at the great purple arm. His blade skittered across the creature's gauntlet before burying itself in the flesh of the ogre's shoulder. Pivoting, Alistair recovered the blade, recoiled, and sprang, piercing the creature's heart.

He landed heavily on top of the ogre as the beast fell, falling on his crushed arm. His fight had carried him away from Oghren and the crown's squadron, and a quick look around him revealed no friendly faces. Grunting with pain, he slid his broken arm from the shield, and stood with his back to the catapult, waiting for the next enemy to show itself.

The frenzy of battle was unabated. Crown soldiers and darkspawn surged around the catapult, and the air was filled with the screams of the fighting and the dying.

A familiar bellow sounded from the other side of the catapult. The other ogre was advancing around the siege engine, tearing off parts of the contraption as it went. It met his gaze with a bellow that shook the earth, showing massive yellow fangs. Swallowing blood and bile, Alistair met its challenge with a war cry, stepping forward, sword ready to strike.

Then a new sound filled the air, rising over the tumult of battle like a sea wind. It was a cry, not furious and frenzied like that of an ogre, but deep, strong, and mournful, and for a moment it seemed that every being on the battlefield, whether elf, dwarf, man or darkspawn stopped to hear it. The sound sent a chill along Alistair's spine, and he wondered grimly what new enemy could be advancing that made even a rampaging ogre stop in its tracks.

But no enemy came. A single line of mounted soldiers was charging down the hillside, cutting down the darkspawn as they came. Cavalry? But he had sent Bann Teagan with the Denerim horsemen to fight at the Brecilian border, and anyway, the muted green armor these riders wore was in no shade of any regiment of the crown. A closer look, and he saw that they were not horsemen at all. They were elves – riding the great halla beasts of legend.

The Dalish.

He stood his ground, meeting the ogre as it charged, pivoting and turning to avoid the creature's blows on his wounded arm. He dodged and rolled, slashing out with his blade as he turned, trying to land as many blows as he could, while staying clear of the ogre's grasp. It was useless. With a fist like an anvil, the beast beat at him, knocking the sword from his good hand as with its other arm it lifted him from his feet, gripping him so tightly he saw stars.

Uselessly, he pummeled against it with his fist, turning in the creature's grasp, trying to find an opening. The massive hand tightened against him, and he felt a sudden, searing pain in his chest.

Just like Cailan. He almost wanted to laugh at the irony of it all, but there was no breath in his lungs. He waited, immobilized, for the death blow, feeling nothing but the rush of blood in his temples and the pain which threatened to engulf him.

Then a bloody blade protruded from the ogre’s chest and the beast’s grip slackened. Unable to break his fall Alistair tumbled to the earth, landing hard on the stony ground. His vision was darkening, and as if from everywhere he heard the drumming of hooves. Faintly, he realized that he was now lying under the protective body of a halla which stepped nimbly over him, its antlers lowered like a strange, spiky shield protecting him from the darkspawn.

Someone leapt down from the halla, and he heard swift footsteps racing toward the bellowing ogre. With eyes clouded by blood he saw a blurry figure leap through the air toward it, blades flashing with a strange light. Then the pain overcame him and Alistair saw nothing.

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Awesome chapter! More, more, more! :)

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Freckles04 wrote...

Psst. Formatting. :)


Sorry, Freckles! For some reason every time I post it tinkers with my story formatting. Hope it's readable now!

And thank you, Tarante11a! So glad you enjoyed it!

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Chapter Seven, Part One

“Your Majesty? Can you hear me?”

The voice caused his eyes to open, and for a moment, he was overwhelmed by light and blurred colors and shapes.

“His breath is steady,” the voice continued, and from some distant memory it seemed to him that there was something familiar about it, though perhaps that was his blackout on the battlefield talking.

“Ma serannas, lethallan. And can you get me more water and bandages?”

“Yes, Neria. Right away.”

Neria... the name entered his brain like a cool breeze, clearing the bloody haze from his mind. He opened his eyes wider, and willed his vision to focus.

Had he not known her so well all the years before, he would not have recognized her. She was no longer dressed in the mage robes of the Circle, but instead wore Dalish armor, which glistened in the light like leaves in a sun-drenched wind. In place of the staff she had always worn on her back, she bore two elven blades, their metal shimmering with the light of magic. Even her face had changed: strange colorful tattoos now crowned her forehead, and snaked like ivy down her cheeks.

It's you. He tried to speak her name, but choked instead, feeling the bitter aftertaste of blood in his throat.

“Shh. Let my magic do its work,” she said softly, and for a moment her voice took on the tone it had when he first met her – strong and self-assured, and with more than a little disdain for him – for being human and a templar, and for not being a mage.

“You tried to kill an ogre alpha on your own. You really haven’t learned anything from the past, have you?” Her hands were busy with herbs and bandages, but she smiled at him in good-natured mockery.

No, it seems I haven’t. He tried to raise his head, but even that caused his vision to blur, and sent aches through his muscles and bones.

“Easy,” she said, gently propping him up so that he could get a better look at himself.

Maker’s breath
. It looked like he’d taken a dive into the archdemon’s maw. Bandages covered his chest, and his belly was purple with bruises. His left arm was still broken, and bleeding through the bandages. As for his legs...

“You were lucky to escape with your life. I don’t think you’ll be walking any time soon, but the damage will not be irreparable. I’ve given you herbs to stop the pain for now, though they'll burn like Andraste's pyre when the medicine wears off."

She lifted the bedclothes, and he could see that splints and bandages adorned both limbs. Thank the Maker I can’t feel them yet.

“Anyway,” Neria continued, “there’s very little of you that isn’t broken, bloody or bruised in some fashion, and your army seems woefully short on mages, so it looks like we’ll be spending some time together for awhile.” Her voice had changed, and abruptly, she moved away from him, busying herself with something beyond his limited range of vision.

“I’ll inform Oghren and the other commanders that you’re awake. I’m sure they’ll want to see you.”

“Neria.” His voice was hoarse, and his throat burned. But she turned to face him, and for an instant he could see the tears in her eyes, and a grimace of pain on her face. Then she straightened, her face hardened, and she bowed stiffly.

“Your Majesty,” she said, and was gone.

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Wooo!! I like where this is going, and I had no idea she was going to show up when the Dalish came. I <3 the Dalish. Keep it coming!!

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Aw. Good ol' Alistair, breaking female hearts across Ferelden...sigh. Nice chapter. More! :)

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Chapter Seven, Part Two

"Where is he? Where is the king?" Face drawn with worry, Simon pushed his way into the tent, his face falling further into its scowl as he saw Alistair.

"Sodding ancestors," Oghren cursed from behind the Orlesian Warden. "You look like a golem used you for a punching bag."

Neria followed the men into the tent, carrying fresh water and linen. Gently, she removed the bandages from his chest, Alistair watching her ministrations with a nauseated curiosity as she replaced the bloodstained poultices with fresh linen and herbs.

She closed her eyes, and Alistair felt the familiar tingle of magic fill the tent as Neria prepared to cast a  spell.

"What are you doing?" Simon asked suspiciously, as Neria placed her fingers on either side of Alistair's throat,  murmuring the words which accompanied healing magic.

"I am healing the torn tissues in his throat, Commander," Neria replied softly, her eyes blank and neutral before his angry glare.

"But who are you? And how do you know the king?" Alistair recognized the look on Simon's face. It was the same expression he used when speaking to the Warden emissaries from the Anderfels, who had become infamous among the Ferelden Wardens for paying surprise visits to Amaranthine to "check in" on the Orlesian Commander.

"Simon," he said, feeling Neria's spell run like cool water down his parched throat, "she is the reason I am alive. This is the Hero of Ferelden."

Simon halted, clearly at a loss for words, as the conversation was broken by Oghren's amused snort.

"I thought she'd make her way back here. She just had to let us squirm a bit first." He grasped Neria in a hearty handshake, which quickly turned into a bearish hug. "It's good to see you again, Warden. Been a lot less fun killing darkspawn without you."

"Oh, Oghren. You're just saying that because you missed having someone to play Diamondback with." Neria smiled, clapping the dwarf on the shoulder. "It is good to see you too, old friend."

Time and silence hung heavy in the tent. Alistair looked from Oghren to Neria, feeling for a moment that all three of them were looking back ten years earlier, to a time when such jokes and easy sparring had been commonplace. It was almost enough to believe that if he closed his eyes, he would be back in their old camp, recovering from their latest exploits, or sobering up after crashing the nearest tavern. Then the moment faded, and time reasserted itself with the heavy weight of his broken limbs, the stench of the tainted ground, and the sounds from outside the tent, of other  soldiers in pain.

He turned to Simon.

"Is the stone secure?"

"Yes, Your Majesty. The crown squadron guards it now."

"And what of..." the words almost fell dead in his throat, but he forced himself to say them. "What of the mages?"

"The Tower is fallen," Simon said softly, "there are a few survivors, but... most perished in the battle. We are trying to recover their bodies now."

Alistair shut his eyes. The words tumbled over and over in his head. The Tower fallen. Drawing a slow breath, he opened his eyes again and looked at Neria.

Her face was darkened and drawn. Though Neria's hands moved quickly, tending to his splints and bandages, Alistair thought he saw her tremble at the words.

"They will come for it again," she said softly. "It is too powerful for them to leave it alone."

"Neria's right," Oghren rumbled, looking easily to the Warden mage as if she had been gone only a week, instead of a decade. "We can't leave it here."

But Alistair gazed at the elven Warden, a knot forming in his stomach.

"You know what that... thing is?"

Neria nodded slowly.

"Yes. It is a Vhen'talennahr. A stone of the gods."

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Nice! More! :)

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Ohhhh can't wait for more!! You write Oghren excellently - keep it coming!