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[Deviation88]

Hey, I'm one of those players that often cannot play RPGs due to a misplaced skill point nagging me forever.  I've also come to realize that this extends to custom character faces.  There's something about my current character's face that seems 'off', and I can't enjoy the game with them until I fix it.  In Mass Effect this seems to materialize as me viewing the face proportions as unrealistic, or not in the realm of possibility which breaks immersion.

I've linked a jpg with a few views of the face.  I think that the character's nose is too long.  It is only about 1 slider longer than the default Shepard's in the character creator but in game it seems much longer than all the other character's noses.  The thing is when I shortened it up, because it is convex, that also looked 'off' or 'wrong'.  Or maybe the eyes are too wide, I'm not sure exactly.

http://i722.photobuc...pg?t=1267156884


Any feedback is very much appreciated.
Thank you for your time.
Have a nice.

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Update:
Version 2:

http://i722.photobuc...pg?t=1267383475

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Update:
Version 3:

http://i722.photobuc...pg?t=1268017923

Modifié par Deviation88, 08 mars 2010 - 03:14 .

[ChaosUndivded]

if u were going for a somewhat middle-eastern look it looks ok to me, well eye colour is totally wrong but you could be wearing contacts.. other than that, the eyes do seem a little far apart.. nose is fine, i think it's just the way the light highlights the bridge that makes you think it's longer.. ask dr michel for a nose job



btw, it's just a game, get over it.. just my $0.02 worth

[Deviation88]

Hah, I know what you mean. I wish I could get over it, every time I try to ignore it it just irritates me so I can't enjoy the game. Bad personality traits of mine.



Thanks for the feedback.

[vehzeel]

aren't the cheeks a little too narrow? otherwise, he looks good. turkish or persian, perhaps?

[Patriciachr34]

Try thinning the jaw line. I think that might give you a more balanced look.

[Zaxares]

Yeah, I agree with vehzeel. I think the cheekbones are too pronounced in relation to the rest of the face. Try bumping that down a notch or two, see if that helps.

[Deviation88]

Hey,
Thanks for all the feedback!
I used it. Here's version 2.

http://i722.photobuc...pg?t=1267383475

Changes: Eyes closer together, less pronounced cheek bones, higher nose, thicker neck.

I'm pretty happy with it, with just 1 last nitpick. Since I brought the eyes closer together I'm wondering if I should also make the cheeks less wide and more pronounced. Instead of more wide and less pronounced.

AIEEEE!

Thank you all.

Modifié par Deviation88, 28 février 2010 - 07:02 .

[Devos]

While I think the comments people have made are valid, overall I actually prefer the first one, had more character.

[Shanra]

For whatever reason, that 2nd picture is extremely dark to me, and I can't see anything. The cheeks are a bit too narrow, but he's not bad. A slider or two upwards on the nose would work. And maybe a notch outwards on the eyes.

[Deviation88]

Version 3:

http://i722.photobuc...pg?t=1268017923

Changes: wider jaw, wider mouth, closer eyes, less gaunt cheeks.

Alright. I think I'm definitely done now. Almost perfect timing for spring break.

Thank you all for the feedback!

Modifié par Deviation88, 08 mars 2010 - 03:17 .