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[King Killoth]

Please ignore the typeos and spelling errors. I can't spell to well but i do still try.

This is the story of a Werewolf who broke from the pack and was the first to find the Lady and himself.

"IT HURTS!!!" I screamed out as I felt the curse buring through my vains. I twisted and shook from the pain as my bones poped and cracked. my hands grasping and clawing at the soft earth of the forest floor. My screams of pain reaching no one in this cursed forest. I could feel  my body ripping apart as it transforms into somethign els. My mind feels over whelmed by this rage. this beast is consumeing me body and soul.

With a dreaded Howl I cry out into the night air. I Am broken to the will of the beast.

I stalk these woods seeking my pray. move left keep low. the scent of blood fills my nose. track it follow it. keep low move slowly. can't let my pray see me untill its time. no noise keep quiet. the sound of twigs breaking. some ones comeing. keep low watch them. my pray close unaware. the sight of blood from the arrow. Did I fire that arrow. No no arrow not mine. my mind floods with thoughts. not mine or where once. hard to think. pray moveing keep low don't frighten it. quickly move behind it. blood smells wrong. feel wrong. mind wrong. remember a family. no no family only forest. footsteps. somethings comeing for my pray. smells of the curser kin. pointy ears. after my pray.  my pray wrong. smells wrong not of this world. pray no wolf pray no evil. can it see me.

the hunter takes aim with his bow. He draws the string back to his pointy elf ear. he takes in a deep breath as he draws back holding it wail takeing aim. this white wolf would make a lovely trophy for his clan. he lets out his breath slowly as he lets lose his arrow at the white wolf. the arrow ripps threw the air with great speed.

Mind wrong pray forcus. must help. arrow hurt pray.

with a speed not natural to this world a massive wolf leaps from the bush snatchign the air mid air with its massive gaggid fangs. the hulking wolf rises to his hine legs growling to the hunter as it snaps the arrow in its jaws. the beast lets out a fearsum roar bareing claws and fangs. Its rage clear. The hunter draws an arrow and takes aim as the ebast drops to his paws and charges. so fast  the hunter cna't draw back his arrow. the ebast is over powering him quickly. The hunter screams for help as the powerful jaws are around his neck . his screams are cut short as the beast rips him apart. the beast devoured the hunter with speed and strangth.

pray safe. pray hurt. help pray. no not pray soemthing more. something better. something connected soemthing familuar.

The massive wolf stood up and walked to the small wounded white wolf sniffing the blood as he grew closer. the white wolf burst into light changeing into a beautiful women. her body smelt of the forest. the beast stood inches from her.

"Wh..Whooo..Arrrrrre..Ya..Ya..Yooooouuuu.." my voice..sounds wrong. sounds new. can't remeber speaking befor.

"I am the lady of the forest..your maker" she looked up at the beast towering over her. the pain from the arrow stuck in her thigh from the elf hunter. this was a first for her. none of her other wolves spoke to her. they seemd to be consumed with rage to be anything more than rabid aniamals. this one was smart and protected her. her  vine coverd hand reached out to the beast unsure of his intention.

she reached out to me. my paw grabd her hand I can think. I feel more myself. I help her to her feet. I dont want to hurt her. I need to help her. this Lady means something to me. she is wounded I need to help her. I lifted her into my arms and now i run to my cave..no its not a cave its a building. I know this now. did she make me know this.

her black eyes watch as the beast carryed her threw the forest with great speed. he took her to an old ruined building. he seemed to be smart less bound to his rage. she held onto him as he ran so swiftly. her ahnd reaching for the arrow pulling it out of her leg. with a sharp pain she pulled it out. he laied her down on the stone floor under the large tree growing from the ruins.

"Huuurrtt..Mmmee.. Hel..(growl) hellpp.. Lady" I rember words. words I have not spoken befor. I feel right around her. no longer do i feel wrong.

she looked up at her swift runner. he cared for her. He wanted to help her. she grasped a near by leafe and placed it on her wound. the blood stoped flowing as the leaf acted as a bandage. her eyes looked up to him she reaches out to him. he knelt to her sniffing her as his heart slowed . she could sence his mind being awakened. "you can relax my friend.. we are safe here" her words her voice sooths the beast.

"I..feel right.Lady" I look into her eyes. she understands me. " I will serve you Lady..I am a Swift runner. none are faster." I spoke to ehr as if I had spoke all along.

"Indeed you are my Swift Runner. I thank you fro saveing me. are there more like you?" she asked looking around the empty room.

"only those who's midns are still lost to the beast..maybe Lady can fix their mind..like lady did for me" I spoke of the other beasts in the forest. the ones i had made and that made me.

"call for them. bring them here. I will help them awaken" she spoke to her wolf gaurdien. The wolf steped into the clearing and let out a powerful and loud Howl Calling forth all the nearby Savage wolves. with in moments the ruins where filled with savage beast crawling on their paws. The smart wolf stood infront of his Lady ready to defend her. The clsoer they got the softer the growls became soon they all stood and looked aroudn sudenly aware of things.

"Diddd..sh..sh..shee..Clear...mind.." spoke one wolf ashe he steped forward. the wolf protecting her stood befor the other wolf " She is the Lady she fix us. We serve her. I am her SwiftRunner." he turns to look at her as the other wolves kneel befor her. she stands and looks at the army of werewolves befor her.

"I will serve you as you serve me" her voice soothing the beast in the ruins. " and We will seek vengence ont hose who cursed us all" with those words all the werewolves let out howls of  joy for now there was hope.

[Sisimka]

This is the most unique premise for a Fan Fiction I've seen, keep it up!



(As for the spelling/grammar etc - my own is quite dreadful, so I always hesitate to comment. I use MS Word to write - it has a spell checker and grammar checker (that I disagree with A LOT), but there are many tools available for free download that can help you with this!)

[King Killoth]

Sisimka wrote...

This is the most unique premise for a Fan Fiction I've seen, keep it up!

(As for the spelling/grammar etc - my own is quite dreadful, so I always hesitate to comment. I use MS Word to write - it has a spell checker and grammar checker (that I disagree with A LOT), but there are many tools available for free download that can help you with this!)

wow some one actualy read one of my storys..Honestly i never expected that.. my first story kinda whent unnoticed. well Im glade you like it msotyl I write how it would feel to be the person I write about. altho I tipicly write for myself. not many people will read my work cuse its..diferent or miss spelt. but if you like this one please read Tale of the Abomination link on my sig. its diferent but I like it dispite its lack of reading from human eyes.

[LadyAly]

! I do love this story - and for the spelling and grammar - *snicker* I'm a german and make always some attempts to write ALL in english. You have done fine

[moemie]

I really like this story. A story from the werewolf point of view is rather unique I think, so thank you