SithLordExarKun wrote...
You were cherry picking and comparing the best written paragraph of two other reviewers to the absolute worst in the one i posted. Maybe you should actually post the paragraphs which weren't so badly written, such as this one.
I won't say you couldn't call it cherry-picking - I did pull out the sentences and paragraphs I found immature.
However, you are mistaking writing proficiency with writing style. Let me define what I mean:
writing proficiency - how well written, grammatically, a piece of writing is
writing style - the type of content and tone of the piece of writing
The two reviews I quoted from were mature, analytical and explanatory. There was no name-calling, there was no hyperbolic exaggerations, there was no mocking, there wasn't the sense that the target audience were 13 year old boys.
The review you linked to was full of hyperbole, made many over-the-top claims, and tried to be "entertaining" in the style of "if I hate on this game you'll like my review." The reviewer says as much at the start of the review - I quoted him explaining the style his review would be written in.
So if you ever want to "compare writing styles", don't go cherry picking. Thats like trying to compare two models and you cherry pick the worst possible picture of one model and then compare it to the best possible picture for the next.
And how does one with better "writing skill" equate to having a superior
and universal opinion?(This is something you seem to imply)
I hope above I showed where you misunderstood what I was looking at.
Here's what confuses me, you say you don't give a damn about his opinion, yet you check out his other reviews and then try to compare his supposed horrid writing skills to other biased reviews. Wait, weren't you the guy that disagreed and defended FFXIII in the other thread i created?
What I meant was as I started reading that FF XIII review I saw that his style of reviewing was the kind I dislike. Doesn't make his review right or wrong, just means I don't enjoy that kind of negative reviewing style.
Then I considered that I could be judging his style solely because it was attacking a game I liked - I tried to take into account personal bias. So to be fair to the guy, I clicked on his name to peruse other things he wrote to see if he always wrote like that. And from the few things I skimmed, yes, his writing style is what I don't like. That's all that meant. I don't know where you were going with that, but whatever.
Do you mean the thread you created that was locked due to it being the upteenth "hate on FF XIII" thread? Yes, I happened to get a post in there before it was locked.
I am surprised your next "what's the most overrated game" thread was not deemed too similiar to the other "what are the most overrated and underrated games" thread, as apparently to Stanley Woo THAT is not similar at all:?
It's clear you don't like FF XIII, and that's fine. I think it's clear I like it. We can trade reviews and state reasons why we feel one way or another, but how about we dial back and try not to make it personal? :innocent:
Modifié par MerinTB, 23 mars 2010 - 06:31 .