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[GuderynAdelmar]

This is my first try at fan fiction so just tell me whatcha think.


            Darion gripped the hilt of his sword as he peaked around the corner again.  He had never been in a situation like this.  Sure he had gotten in touble with the law before but it wasn't a life and death situation.  Around the corner there was a Knight with Howe's coat of arms branded on his armor, with him were three soldiers with that same coat on their shields'.  He looked behind him at his mother and the servant he had saved, his mother had a look of courage but the servant look frightened, he didn't want to die.  Darion didn't blame him.  He turned back around the corner and saw the knight kneeling down looking at something.  Blood.  He didn't know who's it was but it was headed in the direction of the kitchen, supposedly where his father was.  He had to do something, and fast.  He noticed the knight try the door but it was jammed.  The knight motioned for the soldiers to get ready then lifted his hammer.  That's when Darion ordered his companions to charge.

            Darion smashed his shield into soldier's face as he charged at him.  He heard a crack, and blood spewed from his face.  He turned to the next on-coming soldier and kicked his feet out from under him, then he thrusted his sword through the man's chest.  He turned and saw a hammer coming straight for his head and blocked it with his shield, shattering the shield and breaking his arm.  He willed to keep fighting even though the pain was unbelievable.  He slashed at the knight's head then dodged and oncoming blow.  He tried and uppercut to the man's chest but the knight parried and countered.  Darion rolled to the side as fast he could to avoid the oncoming hammer.  He stood up and made a strong overhand blow the knight's head.  To late had Darion seen the pommel coming straight for his chest, knocking him backwards and breaking several ribs.  He gasped for breath as he felt the pain welling up inside him, he looked up to see a hammer coming straight for him, but then two arrows sprouted from the knight's shoulder and he stumbled backwards.  Darion turned to see the servant stabbed by one of the soldiers, but then that soldier being mauled by Seamus.  He turned back and saw the knight recovering.  Darion rolled back onto his feet ignoring the pain, he had to push himself here.  The knight made the first swing at Darion, but he dodged it easily.  Darion swung straight at his head but the knight simply parried it.  Then, Darion saw his chance.  He feinted to the right of the knight's head then, swung sideways at his chest.  The blade sunk into the man's armor, and he fell to the ground in pain.  Darion stepped over him taking his sword in one hand and stabbing the man through his visor.  Blood and gore sprayed everywhere as the blade was thrusted into his head.  Darion stepped back and looked around him.  All three soldiers were dead, and the servant lay on the ground motionless, in a puddle of his own blood.  Then, Darion turned back around and took the hilt of his blade and pulled it out of the knight, he heard a sickening schliiick as he pulled it out.  He turned around and headed for the kitchen wanting to be away from all the death.

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That's it.  I thought of that while trying to create the character and decided to post it.  I know there might be some spelling and grammer errors but I was trying to type this fast.  Tell me what you think.

[King Killoth]

Good work. I would like to see more of your work. pelase keep it up.