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[Omega_Novae]

I've spent the last few weeks putting together a small trailer-like tribute to ME2. It's not exactly a trailer, since it showcases some of my Shepard's specific choices, but it's similar to one.

Constructive criticism is appreciated; the final final version is still ahead, but I want some good feedback before moving forward. It's my first video of this kind. If I get the time, I might make a version dealing with my Renegon FemShep, too, just so FemSheps get more video attention than they did in the official marketing.

www.youtube.com/watch

Thanks!

[javierabegazo]

Just a note, there's a little trailer contest, check out the Spoiler Forums for the sticky, prize is a Terminus Gear code,

Modifié par javierabegazo, 14 mars 2010 - 07:10 .

[killersinc]

FTW! Best tribute I have ever seen!

[Omega_Novae]

Just checked it out; my trailer doesn't qualify. Too long, uses default Sheploo, and non-ME music. Oh well. The character exploration aspect of the contest is interesting, though.

[javierabegazo]

I'm going to see if I can persuade him to bend the rules to accept this though, It was really well meshed together, my favorite was the beginning, the scenes of the council, and ME1, with Miranda's voice over. Awesome

My only critique is that the ending seemed like it trailed off a bit. the feeling of excitement spiked higher and higher and at the end it just sort dropped. But like you said, you're still working on the final version, looking forward to it.

Also, moving this to the Spoiler forum

Modifié par javierabegazo, 14 mars 2010 - 07:18 .

[Jaron Oberyn]

Modified the rules. default face is allowed, minimum is 2 minutes, no limit on maximum. And non-ME music is allowed as long as it doesn't have lyrics. So your good to go



Trailer was well executed. Good job on it.

[javierabegazo]

PoliteAssasin wrote...

Modified the rules. default face is allowed, minimum is 2 minutes, no limit on maximum. And non-ME music is allowed as long as it doesn't have lyrics. So your good to go

Trailer was well executed. Good job on it.

Cool, there you are

[Omega_Novae]

Wow, thanks! =D



And yeah, the ending I wasn't too satisfied with. Gonna have to comb through my footage and find some better stuff. Thanks for the comment, javier.

[glasgoo21]

Good stuff, able to convince people to buy

[Mondo_]

Good work

[javierabegazo]

PoliteAssasin wrote...

Modified the rules. default face is allowed, minimum is 2 minutes, no limit on maximum. And non-ME music is allowed as long as it doesn't have lyrics.

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lol, fantastic idea, last thing I want to see is epic images of Shepard to a Lincoln Park song

[Omega_Novae]

javierabegazo wrote...

PoliteAssasin wrote...

Modified the rules. default face is allowed, minimum is 2 minutes, no limit on maximum. And non-ME music is allowed as long as it doesn't have lyrics.

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lol, fantastic idea, last thing I want to see is epic images of Shepard to a Lincoln Park song

CRAWWWLING INNNN MY SKINNN. *Shepard with his/her super-Renegade Lazarus scars* THESE WOUNDS THEY WILLL NOT HEALLLL.

That is all.

On-topic: Given the way I work, I might end up with 500 "final versions"....

Modifié par Omega_Novae, 14 mars 2010 - 07:34 .

[javierabegazo]

Omega_Novae wrote...


CRAWWWLING INNNN MY SKINNN. *Shepard with his/her super-Renegade Lazarus scars* THESE WOUNDS THEY WILLL NOT HEALLLL.

Made me laugh till I teared , oh you wayward emo kids

[Omega_Novae]

I couldn't resist.

[shady501st]

To OP, that was absolutley perfect

[ResidentNoob]

@OP

If Bioware employed more people like you, their games would probably sell even better.

Congrats!

[ChampDude]

Very well done TC. Very well done

[ir7200]

Great vid

[Minaach]

WOW. I had goosebumps even though I've played the game.

Damn good job OP

[Omega_Novae]

Thanks for the kind comments, everyone. =D

[jklinders]

Me like, this was very well done, music fitted perfectly. Right on a par with the ones that Bioware had pros do actually.

[smudboy]

Immediate Music was a nice touch. Good timing.

[Omega_Novae]

Okay, so after a few critical viewings and some good suggestions from viewers, I think I'm just about ready to start working on the final version. So far, I'm considering:

- Improving the audio/visual meshing in the beginning.

- Reworking the buildup to the Normandy destruction segment.

- Giving Shepard more screentime.

- Adding some extra sound effects.

- Adjusting the ending.

Also, I'm toying with the idea of adding a small segment before the music kicks in, but my idea needs dialogue from ME1. Anyone know how to extract the dialogue from ME1?

[Sailfindragon]

Excellent. I really enjoyed it. Loved the music too

[Mallissin]

Best one yet!



The only suggestion I have is raising the volume of the music when the voices are less important. Like for instance, when the collector ship fires. Let the voices peak from beneath the music if they're not important quotes.