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The Raestar Chronicles


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DistinctlyMinty

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This is most of the first chapter of fan fiction I have been writing since I became obsessed with Dragon Age. The central character is Hector, and the story takes place in the twenty odd years between the novels and the game's Campaign, that way, I won't step on any toes when it comes to prewritten content and wont get contradicted by future expansions and such. I hope you enjoy reading about Hector Raestar...

Hector shivered on the chilly cobbles, squirming uncomfortably in his torn and dirtied velvet rags and thinking of home. To say the Raestar estate was a slumbering community would be an understatement. In fact, Hector often fantasised he could hear it snoring and wondered if it dreamed of being a more exciting place than it was in reality. Hector had a lot of free time.  The estate consisted of several farm holds in the midst of the Bannorn, serene and lush; Hector had always considered it his country in itself and had never ventured further into Ferelden than his father’s borders and occasionally the allied freeholds.  Now he hadn’t the faintest idea of his whereabouts besides the dark, windowless room he had been bundled into.

Hector had always had delusions of heroism and valour, without fighting in any battles. After all he was only nineteen, barely learning to shave and only just rid of the painful acne that had plagued his earlier years. Thinking of his predicament, he cursed his father’s stories and his mother’s undeserved praise that had filled his mind with the notions that he may one day be a proud and noble leader of armies and a mighty conqueror of foreign lands as he lay battered and bruised in the last place he had thought he would die in, and he was sure that he was to die here. Bitterly he sobbed for days until his eyes were dry of tears.

That day seemed like an age ago after the time Hector spent in captivity. The day that had begun like any other, he awoke to the sounds of a servant Elf entering his bed chamber with breakfast. “Good morning, my lord!” She chirped.
    “I wish you wouldn’t call me that.” Hector groaned as he sat up in his bed furs.
    “Why not, Ser? You’ll be the Bann of these lands once your father passes and mother says to get used to treating you like a lord. She says you’ll expect it once you receive your proper rank.”  She said happily, placing the breakfast tray on his bedside table and sitting by him on the furs. His eyes moved from her dainty features down her comely figure. She could feel them.
    “I could not expect a more lordly treatment than yours, Illyn.” He said, smiling slightly as he raised his hand to her face and ran his fingers through her hair. He found great joy in her presence during these quiet mornings, and for the son of an Arl, every morning was quiet. He was fond of the way she moved so delicately, and the way the waking sun poured through her hair in a warming golden flow.  She leaned forward and kissed his naked chest, and he squirmed happily under her before wrapping his arm around her, and dragging her into his bed.
    “We really should stop doing this, my lord.” She sighed  as she touched his face so lightly he could barely feel it, then pressed a little harder as he kissed her.  

An hour later they awoke again and Illyn shot out of bed in a panic. She hurried to dress herself and bolted from Hector’s chambers without saying a word, only making worried squeals as she fumbled with her humble clothes. “See you tomorrow!” Hector called after her. He slumped back on his pillow, placing his hands behind his head as he usually did when he was content and thoughtful. A look of boredom crept across his face and he frowned. “Now what?” he mumbled entirely to himself.  Barely a minute had passed before the door was flung open and another attractive, if a little older, woman breezed in. “Get up, boy!” She hissed, throwing a velvet robe onto his bed. “We have important guests today and you’ve wasted far too much time in bed with that servant girl!”
    “Oh, mother, why must you spoil my quiet mornings like this?” He snorted.
    “Because I’m evil. And don’t think I’m ignorant to your activities with that girl, Hector. I should have her removed from the staff.”
    “But she makes such lovely tea in the morning.” Hector said with a mocking whine.
    “How would you know? You never drink it!”
    “Smells good.”
The gap between Rose’s eyebrows narrowed and her lips thinned to a pink line. “Get up, get dressed and get your backside into that washroom right now or I’ll have your old nanny come up here with her favourite spatula!” Hector hopped out of bed and threw on the robes Rose had brought it. She looked pleased slightly, Hector imagined it was because he had underwear on, contrary to expectations.
    “So who are these important guests?” He sighed, as if he the question was arbitrary and he had no interest in the answer.
    “You know who they are, I told you yesterday” Rose said flatly. “Arl Sevain is coming with the Arlessa and their daughter, Evelyn.”
    “Why their daughter?”
    “Careful boy, you’re not so tall that I would not club your pretty face with one of these ridiculous Orlesian ornaments you clutter this room with.” She sighed with exasperation as Hector stared at her vacantly. “Evelyn is the young lady your father and I have picked for you, she is to be your betrothed.”
    “My what?”
Rose’s face turned red and watched a grin slowly crumple his face. Then she used the glare only possessed by mothers and school teachers and jerked forward as if to strike him. Hector darted backwards and shot out of the room, laughing childishly. 

Fifteen minutes later Hector joined his mother in the greeting hall of their mansion. He was wearing his finest velvet garments and smelled of soap now instead of fornication. He walked to her side and she smiled warmly. “Much better, now you look like a nobleman.” She said, proud more of herself for having orchestrated such a feat than of her son, who only seemed to hinder her attempts to turn him into a man of worth and merit. He returned a happy grin as he often did and watched with her as a carriage approached the house’s gates.
    “You realise that I find the notion of depriving so many Fereldan women of me to be abhorrent, don’t you mother?” He said, smirking.
Rose grunted, bemused. “You wouldn’t know a real woman if saw one. Worry not though, son, we found one for you.”
Hector strained his eyes to see the Lady emerging from the carriage. “That’s Evelyn?” He asked.
    “Yes, that’s Evelyn”
    “But I took her to bed at your last salon!”
Rose bowed her head and groaned.
    “Only Joking, mother...it was father’s birthday party.”
Rose was about to turn and exact unknown punishment upon Hector when the butler entered to announce the arrival of guests. Greetings were made and formal protocol was abundant. Hector stayed fairly quiet, shy in the presence of company it seemed and in a grandiose flourish his father emerged from the top of the stairs to greet the Sevains by galloping down in his flowing cloak with outstretched arms. Impressive to all, no doubt, except Hector who was well aware that his father was fond of such dramatics and had in all probability been waiting out of site for some time ready to unleash his performance as soon as they made it to the door.  Herbert Raestar was a portly man with a jolly face and a great deal of greying hair. His smile was stained brown and he wore golden-framed spectacles that looked delicate enough that they might shatter into a hundred pieces if dropped or handled without care. This was Herbert’s sixth pair of the year.  Hector was thankful that he resembled his mother more, but enjoyed the strength and the agility that Herbert possessed in his prime.

The way Evelyn regarded Hector was curious to him, it was as though she knew him but not in a way as intimate as Hector remembered. After an hour of sitting in the Raestar lounge and making idle chatter, of which neither Hector nor Evelyn were a part, both families were sat at a long table to eat together and make more conversation sure to bore Hector to a stupor. The dining hall was a long room, lined with crimson curtains and golden skirting. The walls we cream and textured with a marble effect, the family made sure to decorate the function rooms finely. Along the walls there were various ornaments, vases, paintings and murals of origins long forgotten.  He was happily surprised when he looked up from his food to see Evelyn, who had been placed opposite him and was now smiling politely at him. “How are you?” She said, after looking thoughtful for a moment.
    “Keeping out of trouble, my lady.” Hector replied laboriously. He always found it awkward to converse with women he had taken to bed. He found great sport in the conversation before said event, wooing and charming, but to speak to her afterwards seemed without aim or reward.
    “Good to know, my lord. Still fighting fit, I hope? You bested my brother at the tourney last spring. I’d hate to see such talent go to waste.” Evelyn spoke happily, a playful manner about her tone. Perhaps it is not to be without reward, Hector mused to himself.
    “Which one was your brother?”
At this point, having clearly listened so far, Herbert spoke to Evelyn. “You’ll have to narrow it down, dear girl. Hector bested a few men at that tourney.”  Herbert chortled and looked affectionately now at Hector, who stroked his chin and frowned.
    “Was he the lad whose arm I broke? I felt awful about that but if a man can’t handle a shield properly he shouldn’t be fight...”
    “No.” Evelyn started, cutting Hector off. “My brother was the man you fought in the final bout, he lasted several minutes before you landed a strike to his torso. He went down and yielded.”
    “I do recall that man. A credit to his family, Lady Evelyn.”
    “Ah, if only father would let me fight.” She sighed playfully.
    “I would not fight you.”
    “And why not?”
    “You’re far too pretty.”
Evelyn looked pleasantly surprised, as well as a little shocked. “You think so?” she asked politely. Hector regarded her warmly, tilting his head and admiring her emerald eyes and dainty nose. Her hair had been arranged especially for the day, that much was sure, and a white flower had been placed by her ear.
    “I think you’re prettier than that tulip in your hair. Such flowers do not need to be adorned with others, my Lady.” Hector said, hoping that his knowledge of flowers had impressed her. It was something that helped immensely when it came to charming women, but he refused to stoop to their level when it came to shoes.
Evelyn leaned back in her chair, screwing up her smile in an attempt to hide it from him. “Now I remember you properly. The most charming man in the Bannorn, whom I met at your father’s birthday last year.” She relented, speaking through a flattered grin.
Hector chuckled. “There are more charming men in the Bannorn, but apparently their parents aren’t the matchmakers that mine are. Perhaps I will succeed in charming you entirely before you meet them.”
    “Perhaps you will.” Evelyn giggled

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The families ate for some time, exchanging words of each other’s fortunes and strife and talking of times long passed. Further conversation with Evelyn was pleasant, they talked about childhood, schooling and rolled their eyes together as their fathers laughed raucously at things their mothers found crude and juvenile. After desert, Rose leaned into the table and looked along the length of it at Hector and Evelyn. “You two seem to be getting on well. Hector, why don’t you take Evelyn on a tour of the grounds?” She asked warmly.
    “Splendid idea mother” Hector growled playfully.

Sure enough, minutes later, Hector and Evelyn were readying for a stroll. Hector was fumbling with a belt when Evelyn noticed the longsword attached to it. “Maker, what do you intend to do with that, Hector?” She asked in bewilderment.
    “There are poachers at our every border.” Hector replied, completely non-vexed by her question.
    “And you are prepared to what, run them through?”
    “Escorting a pretty lady may make me a good target, I may have to defend you.” Hector ginned playfully.
    “Barbarian!” Evelyn chuckled.
    “Yes, yes. That’s what they all say. Women are such simple creatures. They’re completely against violence until threatened, and then go weak at the knees when you kill something to defend them.”
    “We shall see. I have the knees of a horse.”
Hector laughed. “I like that in a woman.”
Neither spoke as they left the house. Hector simply gestured to the door and Evelyn walked past delicately in her dainty shoes. The thought that Evelyn was unaware of the mass expanse of the estate occurred to Hector, it amused him greatly as he watched her walking in such impractical footwear. He said nothing of it, and an hour later she was walking barefoot and carrying them by the heel-strap. “You may have told me how far we’d be walking.” She grumbled.
    “Why, had you a pair of walking boots just in case?”
    “No” She sighed, unable to respond in as witty a way as she wanted. “But I like to be aware of such things.” She giggled at thought of the situation and the blank expression on Hector’s face, which quickly turned to concern.
    “Shh!” He hissed.
Evelyn became angry and frowned. “Do not shush me!” She barked.
    “Be quiet!” 
Evelyn’s frown became furious. “I may be a Lady, Hector, but I am not above thumping people who…” Her voice trailed and weakened as she saw the armed men in matted furs approaching. “Who are they?” She asked timidly.
    “Poachers”
    “Didn’t you say you were prepared for poachers?”
    “I was joking.” Hector looked worried. “Do you know your way back to the house?”
    “I think so”
    “Then you are able to run back.” Hector counted quickly, they were beset by at least half a dozen men and he spotted more watchful eyes in the nearby tree line. “Who are you? What do you want?” He demanded of the biggest man at the front of the crowd.
    “We are here on behalf of a man that would very much appreciate your company. I am not here to answer your questions. It is pointless to address me so.” The man replied, gruff and gravely.
    “Dogs always rally behind the largest in the pack” Hector snarled “you only need to smack him on the nose to get them all in order. So let’s have you!”
    “Careful, boy. I am obligated to escort you alive. I would happily carry you if it meant the satisfaction of breaking your ignoble legs.”
    “Have you considered that I am neither unarmed nor alone? This is the hand-to-hand combat champion of the eastern Bannorn…” Hector said smugly, gesturing to Evelyn and smirking. “She packs a mighty punch.”
The bandit snorted. Hector realized that he had made the mistake of assuming that this man was too foolish and meat-headed to insult without consequence.  The man regarded Evelyn without suspicion. “Fool! This is Evelyn Sevain, daughter of a famous coward and a ****.”

Before the bandit could react, Evelyn lashed out with a furious cry and struck him with an open hand. Somewhat shocked, he was quick to react, hitting Evelyn across the face with the back of his big hand. She shrieked in pain, and before the bandit could lower his arm, there was the sound of scraping metal and a sickening crack. He bellowed furiously in agony and looked at his severed hand on the now crimson grass. Hector stood prepared, a bloodied sword in his hand. “Run!” He hissed at Evelyn, and before she was a dozen paces away there were men upon him and orders were being shouted to be after her.  Hector ducked, parried and blocked the many blows that were attempted on him, the tempest of steel was deafening as more men poured at him and clumsily swung their flimsy blades. He ran one through quickly, and after little struggle he had cut another two down but there were ever more around him. Fighting them off, he noticed that a bandit was gaining on Evelyn, and it would not be long before she was captured. Hector fought wildly and shoved a man aside before arcing his sword desperately in an attempt to stagger those before him. When he had grounds to turn and run, he made for Evelyn. She was tackled and shoved to the floor. A weasel of a man stood over her, looking all-together pleased with himself. Evelyn rolled and looked up at his sinister grin and then behind him at Hector, who was desperately chased by many. She saw him toss his sword into one of his pursuers, who bent to the floor without making a sound. The weasel that had tackled her spun about in time to catch Hector’s fist as he slammed it across his chin. Hector caught him by the collar before he could fall to the floor and viciously slammed his head into the weasel’s narrow face.  “Run! Keep going!” He roared. Like a cornered animal he fought up to the moment he had a bag placed over his face and was clubbed over the head. Before he passed out, he heard Evelyn’s screams as he flailed about pointlessly.



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Ok, didn't realise I'd get censored using the 'W-word' but there you have it, the first chapter. I'll keep writing and if the response is good I'll keep posting.

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Second chapter is on the way. Although i don't think anyone read the first. I wrote it for me though, it clears my head and gives me something creative to do.