Reptilian Rob wrote...
Meh, if you're refering to the un-liberal use of commas I guess I could cut it down. Other than that I don't see any spelling errors or the like.MarloMarlo wrote...
Reptilian Rob wrote...
I think I now have my answer and what I am going to tell him, I believe this captures the essence of who we are, both good and bad.
"The alpha, the omega, the protector, the aggressor, to every mind who breaths destruction or defense and to the mind that is at rest. All the children of men, to the old and withered, every life brought and to every life taken. Every pawn at the knights table, every free man with free will, to those who find understanding in anguish and to those who find purpose in euphoria. To those who look beyond, and to those who would travel to the edge, for the souls who fought to the end, and to the souls who lost hope. We endure."
Fix the typos before you send your paragraph to your old English professor.
Thanks though, I tend to type quickly and sometimes errors do occur.
He could've been referring to "knights" which should be "knight's" or "knights'".
My thoughts on the subject in general can either be easily summed up through my Taoist leanings, or ineloquently expressed through direct and indirect observation of the world around me. To save time (and a massive, barely coherent soap-box rant) I'll just say that my feelings on the subject are that we are an inherently conflicted, highly adaptive species that both embraces and abhors change. We are more diverse than any other species of animal on the Earth, but sometimes we see diversity as a polar opposite to unity. We let our feelings and emotions blind us, we put faith in any number of spirits or deities or none, and we like nothing more than a good old internet debate, as futile as they are.




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