JMA22TB wrote...
bjdbwea wrote...
The story should never have been like this. It should've started exactly where ME 1 ended. No silly killing of the main character, no tons of new characters, no shallow and at times outright ridiculous new plot elements. Just a proper continuation of part 1. That would have even saved the developers time, and it would have made ME 2 a much better game.
We've got a brilliant critic on our hands! I'll handle this simply:
If the plot sucked so bad, let's see your new and improved version. How would you rewrite ME2's story?
Well, you where not quoting me, but here is one example of a better way in my opinion at least.
AsariC: Shepard, what has your investigation of the missing colonies turned up?
Shepard: The investigation is not going well, I discovered a quarian survivor who had footage of the collector's abducting the colonist's using some type of swarm to paralyze them while they carry them off in pod's.
SalarianC: This is most disturbing new's, we know very little of the collector's, we would like you to forward this evidence to us, perhaps more can be gleaned from what you found.
Shepard: It get's worse, Cerberus is also investigating the missing colonies, I ran into two of their agent's, for the sake of the mission I worked with them and it went well.
Anderson: I don't trust Cerberus, I doubt they would take such an interest solely for the sake of the colonist's.
AsariC: Cerberus are terrorist's Commander, you should have apprehended them.
TurianC: I agree, what where you thinking Shepard?
Shepard: I really was not in the position to do so, the quarian survivor was left mentally scarred by the ordeal and had all the security mech's attacking us, if I had not worked with them we would not have survived. They also extended an invitation to work with us to discover what the collector's want with the colonist's.
SalarianC: It is strange for Cerberus to extend a hand of cooperation, they must have some altier motive.
AsariC: Still, this may be an opprotunity to discover what their plan's are, and they may be able to help you complete your mission, we can not extend many resources outside of Citidel space.
TurianC: Agreed, you should work with them temporarily Shepard, we give you our permission to do so, but you must not make it public knowledge.
Anderson: Keep working on your mission, we need to discover what the collector's are up to, but do not trust Cerberus, if you discover what they are really after do what you must and contact us when you are able.
Shepard: Understood, I will contact you again when I have more information.
I think its a much more realistic way to get Bioware's favorite little pet into the game. Granted it does not go over all the possible dialog option's for Shep, its just an example. It also leaves the option of treachery and joining Cerberus for douche Shepard's.