Is there a consensus regarding Morrigan's parentage?
Unless Yavana is a lot older than she seems; which is not impossible; there doesn't really seem to be a time period in which Flemeth gives birth to her and then to Morrigan, half a continent away (or raise Yavana, as a matter of fact but it's possible she was abandoned sooner than Morri). Never mind the fact Flemeth is a centuries old elven god/abomination whose fertility is very much under question.
Therefore, Morrigan being a Avvar baby Flemeth stole and raised seems the most likely option.
I say Avvar and not chasind because, judging by character models, Chasind are non-White.A
I don't know, it's most likely something along those lines, Avvar makes the most sense I suppose. I think the implications are possibly a little worse if she isn't her biological daughter, from the perspective of Morrigan might have just had some normal life somewhere and Flemeth's shenanigans are foisted upon her. But on the other hand, taking into account Flemeth's schemes and instilling her own beliefs and goals into her daughters, if she is her biological daughter that's equally as bad I guess. Morrigan does say Flemeth looked younger at some point in the past (which maybe lent credence to her possessing the bodies of her daughters) which is why I sort of question who is actually Flemeth (especially when she refers to herself in 3rd person) and posited that maybe the daughters just adopt the moniker and legend. Otherwise, isn't Flemeth's soul somewhat superfluous, the daughter is already trained in magic and has an identical worldview and ideology for all intents and purposes (thus satisfying the willing criteria). But that's tangential to your question, so I'll end there.
I concur. Everyone that has fic ideas should write them. And yeah, these kinds of things have a way of getting out of hand. I started with ideas for just a few chapters, and then suddenly it became a massive 25 plus chapter ordeal. At least I hope it doesn't go much beyond 25 chapters, I dunno how much I've got left in me.
Yeah, the Warden only just met them, so when given the choice between two random people he just met and Morrigan, I think it's clear what would happen for a Morrimancer. Of course he'd immediately realize he forgot about them once on the other side of the portal.
Yeah, it'd be interesting for her to be interacting with someone that if they say something she doesn't like she has to consider not going with her gut reaction, otherwise she'll hurt her Warden in the process. It would be a very stressful situation for her. I imagine Fergus would find her regular attitude amusing, but you could bolster the awkward for Morrigan if there were a bunch of other guests there and she had to be polite because insulting them would be insulting their host, etc. Though Inquisition Morrigan would probably have an easier time of it, having survived the Orlesian Court.
Is that 25 for BM? I thought it was 20 before, have you conjured up 5 prospective new chapters?
Nah, he wouldn't remember that quickly, after he'd met his son and later got "reacquainted" with Morri, that's when he's like "I'm sure I'm forgetting something." Ariane was great though because you got to chance to expound and define on what the Warden's relationship is with Morrigan to another NPC and that bit with the ring was fricking awesome and came about in a really natural and organic fashion.
Yep, DAI Morri would certainly have an easier time of it, which is why I'm having her go through that between the two games. Sticking point at the moment is whether to go whole hog and have Fergus already remarried during their absence. I am thinking on taking it to the extent that maybe he has another kid now, but in terms of something that's easier to write, it would be easier for that to occur after Morri and co leave for pastures new. I already gave him quite a bit of screentime and exposition much earlier.
It'd definitely be a shorter piece. I haven't implemented this yet, but I think for the many, many 'what if?' style stories that basically rehash the first game I'll just have scenes that show what would be different and arrange them throughout the plot of the game without retelling the game itself. And I'll be waiting. I need all the more Morrigan fanfics I can find. I've started reading fics that don't involve my favorite origin, so I'm getting desperate over here.
Well, I haven't so much as glanced at your multi-warden piece so I can't comment on that but I am curious how you structure it, so I might check it out. Nonetheless I can understand the desire to read others work. Like even if you were to personally write the best fic ever, as the author you get a different sense of satisfaction out of it than the reader, which is why it's nice when people take the time to drop a detailed review.
I concur, in general there needed to be more Morrigan and Leliana interaction, but immediately after that it was needed more than ever. Especially in the case where Leliana and the Warden were very close friends. I mean, you'd think she'd say something if her best friend's son was almost kidnapped. Never mind that the she and the kid's mother didn't get along previously. I mean we do get snippets here and there, of Leliana worrying about Morrigan after drinking from the well. But you'd think we could have gotten at least one conversation between her and Morrigan about the Warden? We get it with Alistair and Morrigan if he's a Warden still.
Or maybe Leliana mentioning a previous banter, where she mentions that she's a fan of Morrigan and the Warden being in love. And Morrigan goes on an anti-love tirade. Leliana isn't even going to try and rub it in her face that Morrigan was wrong about love? I would have loved to have seen something like that.
I can appreciate in terms of them interacting directly, it's tricky since the game doesn't account for the potential flirtation and animosity between the two over HoF. But given the history and the fact that Leliana might have been one of the party members who took Flemeth down, showing her Morri's choice in that moment and giving her the opportunity to support that afterwards would have worked better for me. It had the potential to be a jaw-dropping "I can't believe what Morrigan just said/did" type moment from Leliana's POV. It's just one of those things that has me scratching my head and saying "the pieces are there, why aren't you using them to best effect?"
Something should have been there because like when she meets Alistair, it's an opportunity to show which party has grown and reflect it back off each other. While Al has grown, he still opens with some joke about a demon child or some such and Morri bites her tongue on the whole "this fool again" thought that's likely running through her head and corrects him, it was good to see that with Morrigan coming out ahead maturity wise and they both get past that pretty easily to talk about HoF and Kieran, which was nice. But when Lel supposedly writes to HoF regularly, yet is still highly suspicious of Morri, witnessing that fade scene would go a long way to answering some of Morri's mysteries from her perspective, I'd think.
As for the banter, you'll like the Inquisition timeline interactions I've crafted between the two over this. Just saying. Perhaps that is something maybe best left to fan works but bumping into Morrigan bickering with Leliana over semantics regarding HoF and trying not to admit Leliana was right, that'd be great.
And not having her there to witness Flemeth and Morrigan's confrontation (how'd getting help go for you there Leliana?) would have added that needed investment. Sure keep the Inquisitor there, but I needed some Leliana there, since she has a much stronger connection to the HoF than the Inquisitor does. Or, at least let us mention the HoF in dialogue at some point during that scene. That seems somewhat relevant to the situation. Maybe something like, "Do you really think the HoF will let you just take his child and disappear? He'll hunt you down. You know he will."
As I mentioned a few months back in my massive post, I think the Warden should be mentioned if romanced in that scene just because it's an opportunity for Morrigan to further assert her growth to her mother. I'm cognizant of the risk you can run if this is taken too far. ie: every scene having a token HoF reference from Morrigan, but both HoF and Kieran are pivitol in her change and thus relevant to that meeting, and it really should have come up from Flemeth imo, maybe a jab from Flemeth on sending HoF to kill her so she could play happy families or something.
And if you subscribe to the Flemeth = Andraste type theories, bearing in mind the history of betrayal by men/husbands it seems rather a bizarre omission should they further that plotline for Morrigan's relationship not to come up, since he disproves what she's been taught and would not betray her. One would think that the "plan" with Morrigan was maybe to enact something similar, or produce a similar mindset, thinking back to how Morri describes how Flem would use men for sex and kill them and expected the same of her. So you think about that deliberately crafted personality she gets from her mother, add in the history of betrayals, then add in a purported possession plotline where Flemeth/Mythal can settle in easier if the host is a powerful mage and willing (if one has a personality crafted to hate the world as-is and the world despises you for it, why wouldn't you be willing?)
Sometimes you just gotta go down the pain road. I'll eventually write out a short piece involving that scenario. But happier ideas take priority. Gotta love those kinds of writing sessions. My current one pretty much kicked my butt, so I'm going to have to revise it extensively. I can imagine what her thoughts and feelings were, but I would have liked to see the direction notes for that bit of dialogue. It's possibly one of the most heartbreaking scenes in the game. Except of course for the Ultimate Sacrifice Warden. "I could have had them both." Gets me every time.
I had to write it, but I'd never do it because Morrigan deserves the full gamut of development that is best realised when romanced+OGB Kieran. I was actually surprised by the lines where HoF lives, is romanced but doesn't go with her and she says that she looked for HoF post-WH and seemed hopeful they would be located at Adamant. Assuming her motives are to let him meet Kieran and maybe see if there's anything still there, that's a bit of a "told you so" moment for Morrigan. While I do hate the US with a passion, the implication that romanced Morri went on to have his regular child and realised what was important to her too late (just like in romanced + no eluvian ending), it's profound but I don't want to go down that road. I think Morri's had enough to deal with in her life without that too. Especially as they part on poor terms in that scenario and perhaps every time she looks at Kieran it'd take her back to that time when he turned her down. Nope, can't do it.
Overall, Morri's change of plans regarding OGB Kieran and the changes undergone if she's a mother at all brought some interesting ramifications in the above outlined scenarios, but then striking that human chord will always resonate more strongly with people than anything else.
I imagine there's a way to hit a balance, but that's not what I'm doing. There's plenty of stuff for Inquisitors and their LIs and not enough for Warden and Morrigan during the Inquisition timeline. So there's no way the focus of my piece is changing. But, if there's enough demand I may do something different later. Well, if you find the line I'd love to be reminded which one it is. I'm curious now.
Good to hear, we'll demand more Morri/Warden regardless so you shan't know rest Lizard. The idea of one piece leading into another with a different focus has worked for me before. I could see a scenario where what Cassandra learned in Morrigan's letter possibly leads into a little something something in a separate piece - "you want to try what!?" You then could later tie it back together with the original by way of Morri's explosive shenanigans in your latest chapter. A sort of concurrent pair is intriguing, but then Cassandra doesn't interest me as much as Morri (she had her moments but just not on Morri's level) and I think the romances have lost something with the dialogue wheel.
Anyway, re-reading the chapters in question, there were actually quite a few bits that grabbed me, so drink in the majesty of my praise, I guess:
- -the veiled threat in HoFs letter, one of a number of things from this thread I've noticed found their way into your work.
- -"Coryfathingie", I don't know if that's your own pun or a play on something from the game, but it got me.
- -Mistaking the letter for Josephine's was amusing.
- -Morrigan starting out the chapter with an attempt to mend fences with Leliana and then after the letter goes missing she spends the rest of the chapter getting increasingly pissed off.
- -Varric trying to plagiarise the letter from memory to use in his own work. It's nice to tie in the various shenanigans with the characters in believable, yet humourous ways.
- -Cassandra's whole reaction to the letter, where it came from and HoF's implied prowess in field of smutty letter writing. It builds on what's in the game and escalates it so you REALLY want to know what's in the damn letter, but revealing it would spoil it, of course. Just flowed nicely starting the borderline slapstick nature of Sera's antics and dashing past in a cloud of dust. Then, as more people discover who the letter belongs to, it takes on a increasingly scary nature, so Varric getting concerned when it made its way back to him was a nice touch. Reminded me of one of those cartoon scenes with a ticking bomb that characters keep shoving into the other's hands, all the while you have Morri prowling around trying to find it. 'tis good, I think overall that chapter did a nice job (intentionally or not) of capturing the dual nature of Morrigan, but it's flipped around a bit, so she's like a bat out of hell trying to get this letter back, yet deadly afraid of anyone actually seeing it in case it exposes that other side to her to the world, such as that last page from the end which wasn't stolen.
- -Dorian's brief acquisition of the letter and subsequently absconding from the scene was good
- -Leliana wanting to know the contents was a nice sign off to that scene, I felt.
- -Lel omitting particular licentious details from her story with Kieran.
- -The baby throwing up on Vivienne was neat, that tickled me.
But I think this was probably the one because a lot of different things came together immediately before and after it:
"She awoke to something prodding her back." A nice bit of appropriate Morri/Warden humour to break up the melancholy of the flashback and it flows nicely into her realisation of immediate danger and someone having got the jump on her, it melded vulnerability, a pleasant memory and ever-present danger together aptly. I thought you did a good job with that whole flashback as it happens plus the whole thing also got me thinking again on how quickly Morrigan would start re-examining her mother's doctrine and parenting style post-Origins. I thought it was good to see her thoughts on that post-DAO but pre-WH, struggling to do a good job but not having any experience. Morri rejoicing at Kieran finally stopping crying was great too, I think I mentally added an inward "**** yeah!" for her at that point.
Anyway, I've lavished enough praise on you for that, I will get to reviewing them all in time (plus I'm fully caught up now), at the very least it can serve as an extra motivator, feedback and reviews are one of the only indicators as to a general level of interest in something.
Now I'm curious about what your fic is. I like the timeline you're setting up, since that's prime "What the heck happened here?" real estate. And you're being smarter about it, actually finishing it before posting it. I tried that, I was like three chapters ahead and then got behind and now I work week to week. Oh well, most of my stuff doesn't have an overarching plot anyway.
To describe it briefly, it's essentially what were the two (later three) of them up to in that period. There are overarching themes and background plotlines relating to their goals in the time period. You'll also come to know why I've asked you guys some particular questions as to the plausibility of certain scenarios. But I'll very briefly outline a few of things I'm working on.
So early on, you have the DR, which is, well, darker, and posits what it might actually entail and gets into the heads of the characters at that point. Then you're looking at Morri disappearing off on her travels, the immediate inner thoughts on that from both sides, Aedan will get to bounce that off some of the DAO companions and his brother early on. Some GW business will be alluded to with Alistair.
A few more scenes between post DAO and WH, I'm planning on doing Morrigan's heist of the book from the dalish clan and her meeting with Ariane, wondering whether to have Kieran with her during that part or deposited somewhere else. Fast forwarding a bit, it will cover the Crossroads and "other" world scenarios (taking liberties here, but with an interesting twist). Showcase Morrigan's change(s) & relationship with Aedan & their child, this will eventually lead to Highever and then to Orlais, Morri will get herself set up, there will be a feels scene when it comes time for him to say goodbye.
After that, Aedan will have limited chapters pursuing his quest with some old friends (I don't intend to resolve it, so you won't see them together again, except maybe in flashbacks or if BioWare screws us over in the future). He'll get to relate some of his thoughts on things to said old pals. Morri's business in Orlais ramps up, going to try and tie it in with that Last Court game to a degree, since there is some interesting material there regarding Serault. Also bringing in a bit of referential stuff from WoT2, though I've only skimmed the pertinent bits.
Then you'll have some more stuff not disimmilar to your own work for M + K in the DAI timespan. Also will probably have some chapters regarding young Morri. The most recent addition are some origins camp scenes- some thoughts from Morri after she tries to break it off with HoF, really getting into how that eats away at her as they near the end of the journey. Some exchanged opinions from those who helped Aedan kill Flemeth on how things went down and M's influence on him. The voodoo doll may indeed come up. Essentially it'll weave the bits we got into a fuller tapestry of events, ideally without upsetting anything along the way. HoF is doing stuff, Morri is too, quite a bit actually. Characters like Vivienne will show up before getting to the Inquisition timeline obviously.
But I've said too much already, I'll keep some secrets at least. Currently outlined to the tune of 35k~ words with no one chapter fully complete to my satisfaction and many not even started. My one-shot sad piece flowed a lot easier as a singular work.
I also feel like after reading the books, Yen is the only true choice. I mean, the player may like Triss more, but Geralt's character would always pick Yen. You're not playing as yourself or as a projection of yourself, you're playing as a character.
But I agree with everyone who has said Yen and Morrigan are similar. After spending time with her in Skellige and doing "The Last Wish" quest, it's crazy to see how much alike they actually are. Very similar outlooks and values. Stealing that mask and using it while you're talking to the druid and then her actions at Freya's Garden almost exactly mirror something Morrigan would do.
I'm trying so hard to finish Witcher 3, but I just can't. I swore I was going to attack my backlog this summer too.... it's not happening. I'm close to the end of the main story (I'm on "Ugly Baby" or whatever), but I keep doing Witcher Contracts and fist fights and secondary quests. Haven't touched gwent, because I know I'll get addicted and I don't need to be any more addicted than I already am. I think I'm going to have to play a 2D platformer after this and go into RPG detox.
I can honestly say if you can get your hands on a Wii U, Bayonetta 2 is fantastic. In my opinion, it should have been GOTY 2014. So well made. It makes the first game look and feel like a beta. It's one of the few titles that made me say "Whoa...". I really hope they make another one.
Starting Baptism of Fire very soon (I have so many half finished books sitting around, I kind of want to get through them first before starting another one).
The ideas I have scratched down for fics just look like something that could snowball very easily. I think the good thing about doing something that's a little more episodic is that you don't have to feel like you're leaving everyone hanging if you don't update for a long time (which is probably what I would do since I tend to fall in and out of love with writing all the time thanks to a busy schedule and lack of inspiration).
All I know is that I want a chapter about baking bread and painting sheds.
Indeed, some people don't get that with W3 and I saw a lot of "I don't like Yen so therefore Geralt doesn't" when the reality is anything but. I thought they really nailed her character in W3, like you say, she has her Morrigan-esque moments where she suddenly does something a bit questionable while Geralt's attention is elsewhere but at least with Yen I thought they were very consistent in terms of her driving impetus was centered around supporting Ciri so even when she pisses off the whole Skellige Isles with the Freya's Garden incident, it's easy to relate to and understand her actions because it's done for Ciri rather than a high-minded ideal.
You're a ways off the end of the game still if you're up to Ugly Baby. Gwent shackled me to the game for a good while, it was like a second coming of Triple Triad from FF8 in terms of being a timesink. No time for finding Ciri, there's cards to be played! I only stopped playing Gwent when I could destroy any opponent. To be fair, the game is just jam-packed with high quality content so I did pretty much everything before finishing the game (aside from a bunch of sunken treasures around Skellige, no time for that nonsense.)
You're certainly painting Bayo2 in a favourable light, saying the original is like a beta is high praise indeed. I'll definitely get to acquiring it at some point.
I'd be impressed if anyone could pull that bread/shed scene off with everyone in-character. If you manage it, please call it "not so domestic" or something and have Morri just doing a double take at some point- "how has this happened?"
And now I'm picturing Lel spying on proceedings with a pair of binoculars, trying to catch Morrigan out.
Eh... this is right out of the 'Let's Pretend Hawke Mattered' handbook.
If DA Dofas Numero Uno... aka Timmy Hawke never delivers the amulet... Flemeth is DOA but only to a point... even Morrigan states in DAO that you won't be really killing her... which is good.
As an aside, I'd wondered in the past, with all of Flemeth's daughters, had they all had some piece of extravagant jewellery or amulet with them, if they didn't "activate" and possess the daughter whenever Flemeth dies, ie: Flemeth had left a piece of her soul with each. I can't shake the thought that maybe that might have been the original idea behind scattering them to the winds.