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[Costin_Razvan]

What about Osric's offer? Or is Celene acting on her own?

[LadyAly]

aaackkk - suspense ! A great chapter again.

[Lynn01]

Great chapter! Really enjoyed reading it again, can't wait for more!

[Miri1984]

Woot! Costin remember Osric was in communication with Celene before. He's obviously playing a lot of hands at once.

[Yankee23]

LOVE IT, great work!!!! More please...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

[LadyDamodred]

Yankee23 wrote...
LOVE IT, great work!!!! More please...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

Working on it.  Going away on vacation halted me, and I'm trying to do military based stuff properly.  Pesky details.

[Costin_Razvan]

Need help with that? Can offer some

[LadyDamodred]

Costin_Razvan wrote...

Need help with that? Can offer some

Xandurpein is helping me atm, which I greatly appreciate.  My dumb ass keeps forgetting to thank him.  At the moment, the military stuff isn't huge so I think I'm okay.  It's probably going to get more complicated later on and I might need more help there.  If I do, I will certainly pick your brain.  Thank you for the offer.

[Yankee23]

LadyDamodred wrote...

Yankee23 wrote...
LOVE IT, great work!!!! More please...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

Working on it.  Going away on vacation halted me, and I'm trying to do military based stuff properly.  Pesky details.

I will try to wait patiently. The chapters posted so far tell me it will be worth it!

[LadyDamodred]

Chapter 42

I apologize for the long delay.  You probably would have had this sooner if real life and vacation hadn't interfered.  he next chapter will not take me as long, you have my word.

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 13 août 2010 - 01:42 .

[Yankee23]

Poor, poor Alistair! Why do you do this to him?

I haven't read a whole lot of fan fics but, this is by far my favorite. Your characters are spot on and you do a great job at conveying thier emotions. You are a very talented writer. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[LadyDamodred]

Yankee23 wrote...



Poor, poor Alistair! Why do you do this to him?

Because I can? 

Yankee23 wrote...
I haven't read a whole lot of fan fics but, this is by far my favorite. Your characters are spot on and you do a great job at conveying thier emotions. You are a very talented writer. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you. 

[LadyAly]

Another perfect written chapter and I can only agree with Yankee23 - you are very talented and I'm always eager to read a new chapter.

[Lynn01]

Can only agree with LadyAly, can't wait for more!!!!! This was a great chapter again!

[LadyDamodred]

Chapter 43

I am really, really missing all that fluff from the beginning. 

[Lynn01]

*sob*

[Costin_Razvan]

Right. Alistair who betrays Fereldan when he can't have vengeance for Duncan's death if you spare Loghain would SOOO sacrifice his wife for Fereldan.



Out of Character on so many levels.

[LadyDamodred]

B/c characters don't ever change or grow. We know from Gaider that Alistair would regret his actions deeply if he left Ferelden. I don't think it's so out there that as he grows up and learns to be a king that it's something he would do. He has responsibilities and he knows he can't abandon them. He grew up. Everyone's gotta do it sometime.

Edit:  This is not to say I don't value your opinion, because I do.  I don't mean to come across as a b!tch or anything.  But the Alistair is my story is not the same as in-game Alistair.  This is what I project him to be in the future and that's something we can't ever know.  I respect that you think it's OOC, but I ask that you keep in mind that he's older, wiser, more mature and, most importantly, no longer the same as he was if he abandons Ferelden.

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 20 août 2010 - 05:05 .

[Costin_Razvan]

In how many years did that happen? 3-5?



He only regrets if he is unhardened, if he is hardened then he does not regret his actions at the Landsmeet. I also very much doubt that the man who was willing to give his own soul for the woman he loves change from that. If you leave him at the Gates and do the US then he leaves Fereldan even if he is crowned.



So while I MIGHT think Alistair would do that kind of choice, I think you made him take it too lightly. For him there wasn't even the consideration of accepting Osric's offer ( and that's the most OC part in that whole chapter ). The decision is made since he opens the letter. It only takes minutes for him and Fergus to talk and then they are back in the war council?

[LadyDamodred]

Gah! Cross edit!

It's been about 5 years, I think. And exile!Alistair does regret his decision to leave, going by what DG said. If he added that only unhardened Alistair regretted it, I missed it somehow. And if Alistair is king, he doesn't leave if you do the US. That's only GW Alistair.

Hmmm. Too fast? Maybe. I can see where you're coming from on that. Alistair has always seemed more of a snap judgement type of person to me, very quickly approaching an answer or conclusion. He read the situation very quickly and knows he can't do what Osric wants. And deciding quickly is not necessarily taking things lightly. It would have taken him longer without Fergus.

Edit:  Also, please don't ever feel like I don't want your opinions/input.  I like defending my decisions (usually) and times when I can't indicates that I need to change something.  I also appreciate the fact that you continue to read, even though I'm sure some of the things I do irritate you to no end.  So thanks.

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 20 août 2010 - 05:22 .

[Costin_Razvan]

I also appreciate the fact that you continue to read, even though I'm sure some of the things I do irritate you to no end

You can't imagine how much. "chuckle." Though seriously I read a story even though I do not necessarily agree with the choices an author makes ( Eddard Stark's death in a song of Ice and Fire for example ) as long as it is a good story.



.....if only I had someone to criticize my choices in my FF.

[Yankee23]

*sobs* Sooo sad.  
I hate the awful things you are doing to Alistair... please write more! (um...the story, I am not actually asking for more awful things to happen to Alistair)

Excellent work!

[LadyDamodred]

Costin_Razvan wrote...

I also appreciate the fact that you continue to read, even though I'm sure some of the things I do irritate you to no end

You can't imagine how much. "chuckle."

Oh, I know.  *grins*  But we all see characters differently, and we write from different perspectives and towards different audiences.
 

Though seriously I read a story even though I do not necessarily agree with the choices an author makes ( Eddard Stark's death in a song of Ice and Fire for example ) as long as it is a good story.

SBAFADBWUIPFHRUIPWEGFBSbfcK;GFBG  >.>  That is all.  Nothing to see here.

And I shall take that to mean you think my story is at least passable. 

.....if only I had someone to criticize my choices in my FF.

Yankee:  Too late!  *proceeds to write more terribleness* 

[Costin_Razvan]

Yankee: Too late! *proceeds to write more terribleness*

What is that supposed to mean?

SBAFADBWUIPFHRUIPWEGFBSbfcK;GFBG >.> That is all. Nothing to see here.

And I shall take that to mean you think my story is at least passable.

It is...though I do not understand what you were trying to say in the first line.

Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 20 août 2010 - 06:44 .

[LadyDamodred]

She asked me not to write more awful things happening to Alistair. I said it was too late.



And the first line was my expressing my rage and displeasure at the Ned Stark thing in the books. LADY D ANGRY! LADY D SMASH!