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#201
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Miri1984 wrote...

Now, time to start gathering allies Lya! Fiona is there! Alvarro sounds like a decent sort! Go woman, go!


Fionna probably would side with her, but the other wardens? Maybe, but that is under the assumption that Osric does not tell all of them about the Dark Ritual, if he does, then she can't expect any allies from the wardens for what she did.

LadyDamodred: Might I ask for permission to use Osric for my own fanfiction? I quite like him as a character.

You know it seems foolish that he did not kill her and Alistair...certainly Zevran could have done some nasty things against the Wardens ( if he survived an attempt, which he might have ), but I suspect there are bigger issues then mere murder at hand.

I am still hoping that somehow Osric and Lya will join forces.....for whatever he is planning.

Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 02 juin 2010 - 11:15 .


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Costin_Razvan wrote...

Miri1984 wrote...

Now, time to start gathering allies Lya! Fiona is there! Alvarro sounds like a decent sort! Go woman, go!


Fionna probably would side with her, but the other wardens? Maybe, but that is under the assumption that Osric does not tell all of them about the Dark Ritual, if he does, then she can't expect any allies from the wardens for what she did.

LadyDamodred: Might I ask for permission to use Osric for my own fanfiction? I quite like him as a character.

You know it seems foolish that he did not kill her and Alistair...certainly Zevran could have done some nasty things against the Wardens ( if he survived an attempt, which he might have ), but I suspect there are bigger issues then mere murder at hand.

I am still hoping that somehow Osric and Lya will join forces.....for whatever he is planning.


Go right ahead.  If you'd like, pm me and I can send email/aim/msn info to fill you in on what exactly he is planning, if it helps for your stuff.

And yes, there are bigger issues than murder at hand here.  He could have killed them, but that's not his goal.  *dashes off to work*

#203
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Oh no..I am not planning to use him until MUCH later ( still haven't even gotten to Ostagar yet in my FF )...still I like to plan ahead. So I will just wait for his plans to come to bear in the story itself.

It will be interesting to see what happens to Lya, cause I imagine he kidnapped her to interrogate about Morrigan's deal.

P.S. From one author to another. Could I ask for some criticism on my FF....you certainly are capable of writing a good story.

Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 02 juin 2010 - 12:00 .


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I think now is the time Osric's plans will be revealed, correct? Can't wait!

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LadyDamodred wrote...
And why sad face for killing the Architect?


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Awww. Who's the cute and adorable mutated darkspawn? ****** coochie coo!



Seriously, KOP, where does that picture come from? I love it!

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KnightofPhoenix wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...
And why sad face for killing the Architect?


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Oh my god, that's is freaking adorable.  Now I want an Alistair plushie and an Architect plushie and I can have them fight little mock plushie battles!

KoP:  Yeah, next couple of chapters.  I haven't been able to write this week, and I apologize to people waiting on it.  Summer vacation is in two weeks.  Extra work I'm doing right now has fried my brain and I don't want to screw this section up.  So if I fall a little behind, I should be able to catch up.

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 05 juin 2010 - 04:29 .


#208
Costin_Razvan

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I hope you are going to explain how they got babies...and not just leave it as a plot hole.

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KnightofPhoenix wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...
And why sad face for killing the Architect?


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Thats well cool :wizard:.   If he looked like that wouldnt of killed him lol.

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Lintanis wrote...
Thats well cool :wizard:.   If he looked like that wouldnt of killed him lol.

Yeah, you'd give him a cookie and tell him to go play with the other kids. :blink:

Modifié par klarabella, 06 juin 2010 - 12:54 .


#211
LadyDamodred

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Hooray for freetime to get back to story!

Gonna be lazy and just link to ff.net.  ^_^

Chapter 36

#212
Costin_Razvan

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Interesting....if short. But one thing I don't understand is who organized the attack on Fergus.. certainly Osric, who didn't touch Lya's family when he could have, is not responsible right?



Hmm...

#213
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 no more updates :(, was loving the story :)

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Lintanis wrote...

 no more updates :(, was loving the story :)


I should have another one in a couple days.  I got side tracked for a bit and it messed me up.  It was hard to get back into the habit of writing some each day when you go a long while without it.  This is also a tricker section, so I want to make sure it's done right.

I apologize for the delay, but never fear, it will be finished.  ^_^

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Hooray! I was beginning to wonder.

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YAY - I was in fear you stopped writing

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Chapter 37!

See!  I told you not to worry!

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So you are going to refuse the offer huh? As stupid as that might be?

Though I am curios if the attempt on Fergus's life was done by Osric or a Third Party....

Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 29 juin 2010 - 10:22 .


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Really, it's not that simple I don't think. The people of Ferelden aren't going to sit back and let the wardens take over the country, even if she does take the offer.



I'd be saying "Sure, whatever you want" and hightailing it back to Denerim with my fingers crossed behind my back, personally.

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Neither was I saying it would be easy to bring up that kind of change, rarely has change been brought peacefully.

Modifié par Costin_Razvan, 29 juin 2010 - 10:56 .


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True. An interesting little pickle to be sure.

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Costin_Razvan wrote...

So you are going to refuse the offer huh? As stupid as that might be?


I would refuse the offer as well.
Not only to saveguard Ferelden independence, but to prevent a disaster from befalling the Wardens as they become more political. The most probable outcome of Osric's vision is a Warden civil war as they compete for power and become divided by established boundaries and that would be more catastrophic than what happened during the previous blights. 

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This has caught my interest so much, when I forgot what the name was of this topic I was like "Oh no but I wish to know how it continues!!". Good thing I found it again :D



I wonder what the outcome of his suggestion will be. She said "No" so much that I tend to say she will agree eventually :P

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She will agree with a lie - anything smart and clever in her mind, to have some time of preparing and shove Osric aside.

Also I bet she knows Ali is searching for her ...*nod nod*

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KnightofPhoenix wrote...

Costin_Razvan wrote...

So you are going to refuse the offer huh? As stupid as that might be?


I would refuse the offer as well.
Not only to saveguard Ferelden independence, but to prevent a disaster from befalling the Wardens as they become more political. The most probable outcome of Osric's vision is a Warden civil war as they compete for power and become divided by established boundaries and that would be more catastrophic than what happened during the previous blights. 


Assuming the wardens wouldn't answer to Osric or future First Wardens. Isn't that his suggestion? ( since you write him you probably know better ). Allow the King and Queen of Fereldan to retain rule over Fereldan but with the First Warden higher then them. 

But I digress. The idea of unifying Thedas against the Darkspawn shouldn't be thrown aside that quickly.