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[Miri1984]

It's the in-game stuff between Alistair and Miranda. Going to be very long, I'm afraid, and I promise I won't stop Consequences (although it's nearing completion!). Also something that's probably been done before, but I need to get it out so I can write all the other spinoffs I want to .  

Up on FF.net here: www.fanfiction.net/s/5843607/1/ 

Modifié par Miri1984, 05 avril 2010 - 04:54 .

[Miri1984]

Chapter Two is up. Meet Morrigan and travel to Lothering to see the sights! Throw up! Free a quanari! Recruit a bard! Have nightmares!

[Crixt]

Very nice

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 3 up.

Lost packs! Wet shirts! Waterfalls! 

Slightly smutty

[MireliA]

Miri1984 wrote...

 Chapter 3 up.

Lost packs! Wet shirts! Waterfalls! 

Slightly smutty

Subtly smutty . 

[Miri1984]

We'll be losing the subtle soon, I promise!

[MireliA]

Damn I'll have to get my fanfic rating changed to M then

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 4 up.

Confessions! Ghouls! Group sex! (ok, the last one was a lie).

[Miri1984]

Chapter 5 up.

Things are hotting up a little. Frustration levels rise. People get shot. A handsome elf makes Alistair jealous.

Oh, and DRUNKENESS!

Modifié par Miri1984, 01 avril 2010 - 08:01 .

[Miri1984]

Chapter 6 up HERE

RATED M for sex. This is my first EVER attempt at *that* kind of writing. Some input would really be appreciated.

Probably longer than it needed to be .

Modifié par Miri1984, 01 avril 2010 - 09:38 .

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 7 up.

[Sisimka]

Miri1984 wrote...

Chapter 6 up HERE

RATED M for sex. This is my first EVER attempt at *that* kind of writing. Some input would really be appreciated.

Probably longer than it needed to be .

Finally caught up with Chapter Seven. I'm really enjoying reading your story. I don't read a lot of 'play-through' stories, but yours is moving a good pace!

I wanted to comment that I thought you got the 'scene' in Chap 6 just right!  I enjoyd it very much.

[Miri1984]

Oh yay!



I agree about the "playthrough" stories. I tend to just want to playthrough the game. I find them difficult to write too. But I wanted to do this one because of Consequences. There are about four or five other stories I want to do about Miranda and Alistair (pre-game and post-game) and it will be easier if I've got this done first.

[Sisimka]

I definitely understand wanting to 'fill in the gaps' so to speak, that's what I did with a couple of the shorter things and there are still more I'd like to go back and do! Now that I've finished Awakening, I can go ahead and read Consequences!

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 8 is up.

Out of curiosity - what do people think about the PC convincing Alistair that he has to become king before the landsmeet? It always struck me as a little silly that you have the option of finding out he's Maric's son pretty much immediately after you leave Lothering (if you go to Redcliffe first) and the PC and Alistair never mention the fact that he's going to be planted on the throne before the archdemon is cold. Especially if the PC is a HFN. I know when I found out he was Maric's son I thought I'd have heaps more dialogue options with him - all you get is "Oh, I know I should have told you but I was tortured about it so didn't. Sorry."

[MireliA]

I thought he would say more about it too. Even in the Arl's study in Denerim he only mentions it once. The rest of the time he's talking about the food in the canteen. No I did find the lack of dialogue about such a major issue ridiculous.



As for Chapter 8, I wondered about how seeing your dead father would affect you after all that time. That was some definitely needed angst. And the cheese conversations.... I'll never look at another piece of brie in the same way.



Good chapter anyhow.

[Miri1984]

Oh, credit to you and the girls at We Alistair for the cheese conversation - I was thinking about it for days

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 9 is up. Violence and blood. Getting to the pointy end at last .

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 10 up. NSFW. Sorry about the descent into teh sexings. But they just can't keep their hands off each other! 

Also some almost-non-consensual stuff here so be warned if you don't like reading that sort of thing.

[MireliA]

As for the non-con stuff, she got her revenge on him before he'd even started . Funnily enough, every time I took a group into Howe estate and once we'd been found out, Alistair would always be stood there in his small clothes (a glitch in the programme). At least thats what I told the hubby

[Miri1984]

Hehe. I figured there's NO WAY Miranda would let him out of there without taking advantage of his non-clothiness. Locked door - no Zevran standing over him... ok, so... torture chamber.. but you know, you take what you can get...

[Miri1984]

 Chapter 11 is up. Politics and intrigue and beheadings.

[Miri1984]

Last chapter up. All done! Now I can get into the other stuff .

Also wanted to say thanks for all the feedback so far. I've been a bit obsessive about my fics recently - writing a hell of a lot more than I ever have before, and I think it's due to the great community, both here and on ff.net. You're all so encouraging! Big, big thanks! 

Modifié par Miri1984, 05 avril 2010 - 05:27 .

[MireliA]

Aww you needed a big 'The End' at the bottom of the page . Really loved the last two chapters and we know how their story does end.

[Miri1984]

I still need fluff lessons. There was meant to be - you know - wedding stuff, and possibly tearful goodbyes, and all that jazz. But my fluff-o-meter overloaded and I had to go and have a lie down.



There's a new one coming soon - four years post blight, so the story hasn't really ended any way.